AK-mixa versus Zikio version 2
 

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Im a rancid rapper and my ak is bustin
only remaing of you after this battle is ur corpse and blood gushing
I'm scanning rappers with my scope from the rooftops
U think u hot my bullet gon make u frost
u better not eat and battle me
cause then there are 2 reasons 2 call 911 for an emergency
one reason will be for simply chocking
2 will be for battling me u must be smoking
so get ur hands and bring them up and down
signal ur submission TAP OUT!!!

well there it is sry for takin long
watin for ur reply

I treat Zikio like M&M's dat melts from my mouth when I spit combusted fire
AK get up on Zikio's face and cranium doing pop-a-wheelies and he re-tires
AK's putting Zikio's face on his ass to use for Quilted Northern toilet tissue
Zikio during dis battle AK gonna put you in da shredder and straight rip you
Zikio been taking damages internally and externally from AK's mouth spittin
da ground Zikio's been walking on with his feet fresh wet makes him slippin
today Zikio swings out holes to compete with AK like spider-man and venom
whoops Zikio...AK accidently couldn't punch and spit acid on ya jeans denim
Zikio's catching STD's being raped over and over from all AK's ill lyrical strips
too bad Zikio is need of a Godly blessed miracle because his ass got whipped

yo my vote goes for timeless he killed u by every catigory

iight I did my shit and I voted herre return da favor by votin in da battle poll of
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112210

good battle
uppin 4 votes vote on this battle ne one

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Im a rancid rapper and my ak is bustin
only remaing of you after this battle is ur corpse and blood gushing
wow this shit is wack...not hard

I'm scanning rappers with my scope from the rooftops
U think u hot my bullet gon make u frost
weak punch.....not close to good

u better not eat and battle me
cause then there are 2 reasons 2 call 911 for an emergency
lmao this is prolly the wackest shit ive ever read

one reason will be for simply chocking
2 will be for battling me u must be smoking
you must be smoking if you think you gonna win....not tight

so get ur hands and bring them up and down
signal ur submission TAP OUT!!!
dont rhyme....not even tight

I treat Zikio like M&M's dat melts from my mouth when I spit combusted fire
AK get up on Zikio's face and cranium doing pop-a-wheelies and he re-tires
so so punch coulda been made better though

AK's putting Zikio's face on his ass to use for Quilted Northern toilet tissue
Zikio during dis battle AK gonna put you in da shredder and straight rip you
so so not good not bad

Zikio been taking damages internally and externally from AK's mouth spittin
da ground Zikio's been walking on with his feet fresh wet makes him slippin
this was pretty good tho

today Zikio swings out holes to compete with AK like spider-man and venom
whoops Zikio...AK accidently couldn't punch and spit acid on ya jeans denim
first part is ill i like it

Zikio's catching STD's being raped over and over from all AK's ill lyrical strips
too bad Zikio is need of a Godly blessed miracle because his ass got whipped
blah nothing too good its aight

ak murdered him...poll vote ak

peep my links in sig and my audio battle at the top

alright....ak...your flow is way off....make something short or do somehtin cuz i kept waiting for rhymes...but you had better punches and structure and a little wordplay...and thats what counts...so vote- AK

return the favor n hit up my battle in my sig....pz

wat the fuck Havok voted for TIMELESS!
how can it be obvious he didnt rap...

newayz breakdown.
Ak took this 1 with no contest his punches hit,his flow was aiight.....
zikio version 2 was very poor...u improved on ur last battle bcus u rhymed abit, but ur flow stunk..
enuf sed Vote.........Ak ak-mixa

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Ak had the punches and his flow was even, but the lines were way too long. zikio didn't reall have hard punches or a flow for that matter, his lines didn't matchup so his flow was thrown off as well. Ak treid to put too many personals in his rap(don't name drop so much)and Zikio didn't use any personals it seemed all filler too me. Ak's opener about the re-tire line was prety good adn it gave him the edge in the battle. because of personals and punches my vote goes to Ak.

VOTE_AK
open battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112317

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uppin one mo gin...........................for poll votes

Punches: AK, better punches, only Z's very last line was halfway decent, so AK takes this category.
Wordplay: Neither, neither had any real wordplay
Multis:Neither, both used 1 syllable rhymes
Personals: Neither, also no personals
Opener: AK, Z had an ultra whack opener
Closer: Z, better than Ak's, your last line was filler.

Vote - Akmixa

Most of your verse was metas, except of your finisher that was a filler. Bad. Go out with a bang. Z's verse was all filler, except for finisher. So that's no good. No filler at all. Add some wordplay and multis for complexity, connects punches.