ILLunatic v.s Amp
 

10 Lines
you spit first
no feeding
no biteing
no recycling
no crew votes
no hate votes
no d/r votes
ect..

I'll post like 10 minutes after you
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Invert the sides, i guess it's time, Ill isn't dope enough to tie
Forget to try, his big grin makes him think that his rhyme is sly
I leave you confused, as we stand amused, and he's left abused
When you try to accuse, I am guilty of settin' of a destrucable fuse
Your avi's tellin' me your blind, you must not see this hororible
Not scared? No didn't think so, but you're still nothin' but horrible
This kid is bull, you're not an executive, after goin' to law school
You're sure? only a fool, sittin' in New York still wouldn't be cool
You think you're a lyrical killer, well the suspense is makin' you shiver
Even if you had Janet with you, you couldn't be close to a thriller


agggggghhhhhhhhh, this was terribly bad, haha

I'm prepared for a grade a merking

haha
this was for fun though, and i don't care about my record

......Quik 7 minute keystyle......
.........Open for votes now........

umm.. kind of a weak battle...
Well both had played lines..
Amp..barely had any punches
He tryed too hard on multies in tha begining
Amp's only punch i saw was his closer
and that was played to shit
Aight subpar wordplay..tha cool/shiver stuff
not feeling that...flow was there though

Illunatic had a straight up better verse
Better punches(tha alias punch)
Tha victories one was good too
aight flow..aight wordplay
Umm..Ill got this in all aspects..mostly

v/ ILLunatic

Dope... 1-0
UPPIN#1
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Invert the sides, i guess it's time, Ill isn't dope enough to tie
Forget to try, his big grin makes him think that his rhyme is sly
weak punches
I leave you confused, as we stand amused, and he's left abused
When you try to accuse, I am guilty of settin' of a destrucable fuse
weak...useless multis
Your avi's tellin' me your blind, you must not see this hororible
Not scared? No didn't think so, but you're still nothin' but horrible
whack
This kid is bull, you're not an executive, after goin' to law school
You're sure? only a fool, sittin' in New York still wouldn't be cool
blah
You think you're a lyrical killer, well the suspense is makin' you shiver
Even if you had Janet with you, you couldn't be close to a thriller
ok


Ya location says from nowhere, fucka amp i'll call you a ghost
The fires been lit........torched to a crisp, this kids burnt like toast
played..ok
Lookin at ya crew.....Suicide Inc? how long does it take for death
Suicides been committed.............but ya'll still takein ya breath
ok
Amp + DopeName = The same wack herb, fuckin weak spices
Take the advices..... just quit, give up....ya gettin rolled like dices
decent
Both of your names... records have more losses then victories
Its sickening.... you'd think his shame would cause conspiracies
nice personal
This was no competition....its like playin basketball with a dwarf
His favorate show is power rangers, and phrase is.. "time to morph"
1st line ok, 2nd whack

OK Ill took this easy...Amps verse was all filler and useless multis..Multis are pointless unless they are also punches/personals/metas...Ill had an average verse...some nice punches and personals...Illunatic gets my vite

PLease drop an honest vote here guys. I took the time for you. Thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112459

peep my audio battle in ....the audio forum and links in my sig

Invert the sides, i guess it's time, Ill isn't dope enough to tie
Forget to try, his big grin makes him think that his rhyme is sly
good multies decent punch

I leave you confused, as we stand amused, and he's left abused
When you try to accuse, I am guilty of settin' of a destrucable fuse
yet again...god multies but not hard punch

Your avi's tellin' me your blind, you must not see this hororible
Not scared? No didn't think so, but you're still nothin' but horrible
so so average

This kid is bull, you're not an executive, after goin' to law school
You're sure? only a fool, sittin' in New York still wouldn't be cool
aight multies...second part is wack bro

You think you're a lyrical killer, well the suspense is makin' you shiver
Even if you had Janet with you, you couldn't be close to a thriller
lmao at the second part good punch plus witty

Ya location says from nowhere, fucka amp i'll call you a ghost
The fires been lit........torched to a crisp, this kids burnt like toast
good imagery...so so punch

Lookin at ya crew.....Suicide Inc? how long does it take for death
Suicides been committed.............but ya'll still takein ya breath
good personal

Amp + DopeName = The same wack herb, fuckin weak spices
Take the advices..... just quit, give up....ya gettin rolled like dices
aight multies so so punch

Both of your names... records have more losses then victories
Its sickening.... you'd think his shame would cause conspiracies
dont understand second part

This was no competition....its like playin basketball with a dwarf
His favorate show is power rangers, and phrase is.. "time to morph"
lmao at the second part good punch

close battle but overall i gotta go with ill..close battle but just an opinion

peep my audio battle in ....the audio forum and links in my sig

3-0..Like DAMN
UPPIN#2
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ok this was one of the weakest battles ive seen from both of you but still a battles a battle......

Punches - Illunatic , mainly b/c i was just feelin his a lil more, most of the punches in this battle were weak

Flow - Illunatic, Amp's flow was long and strectched, it had no vibe....on the other hand Illunatic's was good flow and i could read it fine...

Structure - Illunatic, once again Amp's was stretched and made the vibe of his verse weird.

Personals - Illunatic, i didnt see many in amp's verse.....while illunatic had the one about suicide inc...

Multi's - Amp, illunatic had a few but amp's verse was filled with them...

Creativity - Illunatic, he just had the overall more creative verse..

Final Vote - Illunatic, i was just feelin his verse more overall, but this was a weak battle on bothsides.

This was alright

Amp: You had some good structure in your verse, started out with some alright mutlies, Your punches were alright, could have been better i thought though, Your flow in your verse was alright, overall your verse was alright.

ILL: You had good structure as well, You had the better punches i thought, just hit harder, had good personals as well, you had good flow in your verse, had some funny lines, overall your verse was the better one.

Vote goes to ILLunatic for having better punches and the better verse overall i thought.