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Isqael 02-08-04 01:13 PM

Isqael vs. Virtuoso
 
10 Lines, we each get 30 mins to put up
No DR
No Crew
No Bullshit
If you ain't up in 30 Mins you get DQ'ed, let the games begin

Isqael 02-08-04 01:37 PM

This kid claims to be in the IJL, but he ain't a joker, only a joke
Just like an old guy playing golf, I'll give this bitch a stroke
I'm '~'100 levels above you'~' and it's only because you suck
If you want to know how to write a punch, you can :laugh2:..::Just look up::..:laugh2:
Thinking that having a battle with this n00b, was gonna be some fun
But bitch if I was you, I'd duck, cause if you TEST me.....you'll soon be ~Sonned~
And just like Joe Namath, I will make you this guarantee
After this battle is finished, you will remember me
Nothing Virtuous about this, as you're about to learn
You mess with me, you play with fire, and you just got BURNED

Virtuoso 02-08-04 01:37 PM

..lyrically acclaimed bitch... u forced to perform shit that people don't attempt to do..
Isqael..... with 4 posts an no record.... how people supposed to "remember u"?*
u'd be lucky to dodge my bullets... wit rabbits feet... an four leef'd clovers...
...shit... 30 minutes an counting... shit..." this games been over"*
Hes’s been behind his whole life.. now.. Not makin minimum wage
He MUST be skippin some chapters..believe..we couldn’t be on the same page
on the serious... your IQ on crack couldn't be as high as mine....
an ... u combitions of punches can never work... like 3+4 equaling nine....

*sig
*an teh first post

Isqael 02-08-04 01:40 PM

If I have no sig, and no profile, you got no verse, hope you learn that lesson.

Isqael 02-08-04 02:11 PM

Up
Up
And Away

Tactixx 02-08-04 02:34 PM

you responded to mine so i'll drop my opinion but i dont have enough votes to post officially....................

ISQAEL-This kid claims to be in the IJL, but he ain't a joker, only a joke
Just like an old guy playing golf, I'll give this bitch a stroke
^ok punch i guess...but what are you strokin??^^
I'm '~'100 levels above you'~' and it's only because you suck
If you want to know how to write a punch, you can ..::Just look
^ok personal....decent punch^^
Thinking that having a battle with this n00b, was gonna be some fun
But bitch if I was you, I'd duck, cause if you TEST me.....you'll soon be ~Sonned
^^a little played, the sonned thing^^
And just like Joe Namath, I will make you this guarantee
After this battle is finished, you will remember me
Nothing Virtuous about this, as you're about to learn
You mess with me, you play with fire, and you just got BURNED
^this was pretty good ok punches....closer feels a little played but still good^^

Virtuoso-..lyrically acclaimed bitch... u forced to perform shit that people don't attempt to do..
Isqael..... with 4 posts an no record.... how people supposed to "remember u"?*
^^ a little long flow was off but nice punch^^
u'd be lucky to dodge my bullets... wit rabbits feet... an four leef'd clovers...
...shit... 30 minutes an counting... shit..." this games been over"*
^^nice metaphor and the punch was there^^
Hes’s been behind his whole life.. now.. Not makin minimum wage
He MUST be skippin some chapters..believe..we couldn’t be on the same page
^^nice punch and meta^^
on the serious... your IQ on crack couldn't be as high as mine....
an ... u combitions of punches can never work... like 3+4 equaling nine....
^^ok closer....decent^^
vote-Virtuoso...his rhymes were more complex and the punches hit harder, the flow could been better for both but overall i think Virtuoso had a better verse.

Holmes Jr. 02-09-04 09:17 PM

I think Virtuoso got this one, he used better punches, threw some personals in there and I liked the multi-syllable rhyming which is something you dont see much around here...got a little typo in your closer but it was still alright, Isqael your stuff wasnt bad the shit was just played like mad, and the flow was too uneven to enjoy it..

Vote- Virtuoso

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