Rb's new Hitman...Peep this
 

On the real...im serious about mine..

remember the name..Jihad...RB's new Hitman...yo

Unless I die I testify you will never guess the guy ..
So accurate .. foe maggots get their crest demised
Puff blunts wit cess inside and I’m best when high
Surging’s splurging servants who test my sessions tide
I crept, they cried .. suffering from pain and agony
Got a sweet tooth, woes are just blamed on cavities
I bring the faculty on who claims they tracking thee
It’s ludicrous especially when chambers’ backing me
I’ve trained in mad degrees, bloods soaking in ya pelts
No ammo? Run upon you and choke you witta belt
So sulking wouldn’t help, my provokings the rudest
Tread lightly, or I’ll leave your croaking so prudent
Joking is useless, shells’ exploding so crude, bitch
I’m copping arms larger than the bulk-ness of Brutus
A cult is in movement .. I’m snatching white sheets
Conversing wit bullets and I don’t ration my speech
Laughing at geeks by-standing trying to count ‘em off
Dust you guys .. duck and hide .. you’re bound to fall
Clown them all .. probably get locked in hell for this
Pop a shot, then whole communities dropping Celsius

peace
one

Change your name, now.

Why...

Jihad means holy war..

im a muslim MC..whats wrong with that?..

any1 wanna critique about the rhyme..not my name please..

There use to be a incredibly respected by the name of G.Hod.

He will remain that way.

rhyming lots of words isnt cool
and neither is your name
you'd think after you typed jihad in as a name when u registered you wuda seen that it was taken

Nah i entered the name {jihad}...

because ive allways had that name....im not gonna change it..

''rhyming lots of words isn't cool?''..wtf...said it like a pro son..

uppin this for maby some REAL critiques

okay, your rhyming and internals and multies are all fairly decent....this didn't seem to flow to me. I thought that you put so much emphasis on the rhyming and rhyme scheme that your flow died a horrible horrible death. And your content was garbage. Try writing about something that takes some thought as opposed to something I can hear on MTV. Your writers voice was weak also. If you write about things that matter to you, your writers voice will come across as stronger.

Now change your name before I get E-Pink Belly yoo!

^^
Cool thanks,...

but i think i'll keep the name bro..

peace
one