check out my new song plz give feedback
 

OvDose ft NTense - "Jealousy" is the newest song

Check it out and tell me what u think / give suggestions

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/ovdosemusic.htm

damn after the last track i heard..i didnt think it could get any wacker in the next 5 minutes..but i was wrong..the beat..your lyrics..this is complete trash..sorry dog..no offense..the only thing i can think is that this is some kinda joke..cuz its only worth a laugh..

pZ..

i'm definately gunna have to agree with dude on this one, what exactly was that??? there wasnt even much of a beat, did u make that yourself? i dont mean to be real critical or anything, but STOP! DO IT OVER!! lyrics could have been alot better too, but if u still wanna keep this theme, try a rewrite, get another beat...just, start from scratch man

yea boy ima agree with the others, the beats wack, lyrics wack and u can sirtenly elevate everything, kept working though

hmmmm
 

im peepin Jealousy right now......

the lyrics were OK in the begining, then it goes down hill, the beat aint 2much of a beat, the quality is kinda doo doo...this track could be alot better if took time (not sayn u dont, juss take more) dont take this as im hatin, im juss tryna give u feedback. It sounds like u aint takin rap 2 serious.

CIN
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