The blindest eye(hard and heavy)
 

this is a trash/punk/hip-hop song

I guess you can say its like crazy town even though i would rather not say such things about my music
but It was a guitar beat
Not to much screaming
mostly just flow

its long


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/t...sticatmusic.htm



(here are the lyrics)

Verbal slander/
In many manners/
Stamina inclines when I drop the hammers/
I resume to stay true to who I am/
And always do everything I can/
Say what you will/
State how the fuck you feel/
Just always keep it real!



Failure to exceed past the limits/
Diminished emotion with poetic gimmicks/
But rivals arrive in denial of the end of there existence/
It’s time I end this/
Siphoned my need for sentiment/
Then deposited it back to dark sediment/







Here’s an advisory to my arbitrary adversaries
My peripheral vision cleared but on the contrary/
I can sense your presents near/
The aroma of a bigot in fear/
Presented so clear/
Implements for you demise placed juxtapose/
Elements of arson polluted my dome by I opposed/(drowned in flames)
But this case isn’t closed/
The verdict just arose/
Your translucent you must be exposed/
Dimmed perspective/
Erected defections in all section of depression/
Evolved to aggression/
Mental post mortem dissection/
Collateral with kinetic vocals changed your direction/
Cuz my ways are infectious/
You were once edgeless/
Now your negative/
Your approach was poached with out second opinion/
Minions with vengeance after territorial dominions/
The insensitive actions you present are endless/
Your procedures are hideous/
Retched forthcomings of you uprising/
Pulsated my central nerve system wildly/
And revised my thought pattern mildly/
Cumulated slowly and silently/
Violently percolating and eventually exploding/
But imploding my mode of faith decoding the eroding/
For its organic mechanics and cybernetics are unloading/
Merciful mood controlling personas are growing/
The simple magic of a pitiful imbeciles attempting to be at the pinnacle/
Constantly ridiculed by your relapsing sense of realities interfolds/
You brought this upon yourself
Realize you’re cynical/
Thought processors delayed/
You’re gradually developing into masquerade/
Stop this enthusiastic charades/
Your life’s a lie, I think its time to end it to day/
You presumed I’m internally dead/
Brush the dust off the mantel and less was said/
This is the dirty build up of the bullshit I was fed/
I’m a karma-based life form that never seems to get a head/


I request some respect from this pest/
Ends must connect/
Depressed and prone to neglect/
Character defects/
Left a wreck/
Resurrect once charming effects/
That was over power by stress/
Upset/
No/
Oppressed yes/
I’ll never forget this silhouette of regret/
Permanent emotional scars left/
Process the rest of my meaningless assets/
You punctured my soul you muthafuck!

hmm..sounds strange so far..this beat is totally wack..LMFAO..sorry dog wtf is this?..this isnt worth anymore comments..this is wack..straight up..

-one

can you read muthafucker?

Its a rap rock song(sadly)
your dumb
those are all real insterments
retard make a beat with all REAL insterments
You could'nt play that riff if your life depended on it
Plus Im sure my lyrics will top out any garbage you spit

Another thing
How you gonna say Its not worth a comment but you left one
???

WTF

i said it wasnt worth "anymore" comments dumbass..cant you read?..
like i give a fuck about playing riffs son..that neither makes me or brakes me..
and i doubt your lyrics have anything on mine..since you arent even open minded enough to take a tough shot..when people say i'm wack..i shrug it off..since way more people than you can imagine feel my rimes..maybe you shuld do the same thing and man up a little bit clown..

i didnt like it..suck it up bitch..and move on..

you are alright but damn
This is something YOU need to be open minded on some shit like this
I don't see your logic in saying Im not open minded
Listen to the strength to merely struggle on my page
you might like it
just a filler track on my cd to get you movin
it sounds good on nice stereo

yeah my next track will be better

its the composition of the actual instrumentation and then your vocals..are fuckin Zach De La Rocha cloned type bullshit..dude serious..i realy cant stand how you're delivering your rimes..and the actual instrumentation of all your instruments seems so outta rhythm..its like a group of talentless yuppies thrown in a room full of instruments and told to play them the best they can without even knowing what they're doing..i dont have a problem with the rap and rock shit..if its done well..and thats the reason why people get called wack..is when they think they have something that realy isnt there..no offense buddy..but i realy believe you need to polish this alot more before your bring your experiments to the table..

yep
it needs redone
but i only took that aproach in one song
did you listen to any of my others
Why do people say I jock
rule,dmx,de la rocha, mystical...so on
I just do my thing that way
Yeah the guitar was out of tune
sorry to waste your time
I knew I shouldn't have posted here



Negative ass muddafuckers

the idea is there...i think the outcome could be better if u work on it a little bit more....


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I think so as well
thanks
Im mad busy right now
but ill check it out tommorow

i didnt say you were jocking anyone..its just the way you sounded..i'm sure you got dope tracks too..but this one is a folly duke..bar none..i give it to you point blank because i believe you actually have some talent..and its like "why would you let this out"..when i could go to a novice rapper and give him advice..because hes novice..you dont seem so novice..so its appropriate that if you put out something thats wack..that it be told to you it is..thats just the way i understand it..thats all..

Aight.....not feelin thiz yo, sorry, but just aint the type of thing I think some1 would sit and listen to.......but the idea iz there, just need a new beat, and better delivery...keep droppin yo
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