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B.I.Detained 02-09-04 11:14 AM

B.I.Detained Vs Trapt Wit--No Polls
 
12-16 lines
no polls
no feedin
usual shit
G'luck Chrit

I've been awaitin this lol

oh yea..No Eclipse members can Vote

Trapt Wit 02-09-04 11:16 AM

Checking in.

Man I'm rusty as hell.... dont expect much.

^^^

Use that in a punch.

= )

B.I.Detained 02-09-04 11:18 AM

-Hi-

lol I'll try
j/p
dunny matter if ya rusty
we jus playin anyways

shake sum of it off in here
ewww

now use that as a punch^^

Trapt Wit 02-09-04 11:37 AM

Hmm... sure.... keying now

Aight look

RTM left the wackness behind. BI returned here without question
No wonder kid led to the creation
....of RB's current talent recession
Now count ya blessings that I didnt slip ya last nick
You win.... This kids gotta be nuts
...the way he's always around my dick
Skinny kid with secondhand clothes no wonder ya rep peasentry
And a loss is now in ya forecast
...along with this bitches extremities
Trapt be stackin them bills... yours just try to collect
And yep, this is fractures structure
...so ya jaw knows what to expect
Ya style is weak as fuck, BI's truly behind the times
I mean shit remember 1-2...
...somehow you took 5 days for two lines
We all know what happens now... I win, and you get pissed
You know the same shit that happened
...the last time I booted you from the elite list


Blah.... rusty as fuck

B.I.Detained 02-09-04 12:14 PM

Trapt c'mon now..your RB stay is stretched & ya jus dont Fit
well jus like ya wack ass Structure..Ima go & cut ya into Bits
tryin to mask the fact ya Shit..like an Under-Developed Zoro
Chrits rhymes are so Bland..anti-Depressants feel Sorrow
& we all know Chrit likes to Borrow..but I'l quit n Bite my Tongue
N refrain from played lines..see if i did..I could write a Song
which wud be too damn Long..ya got all the names under the Sun
I easily over shadow Chrit..& fuck Eclipse over jus for Fun
see how can I sonne my Son? I gave birth to the Elicit Jon Merrick
thats the Elephant man for all ya'll..so take Chrits looks on Merit
this boys Pathetic..had to Grovel to CP & Strobe for all his Posts Bk
& still begs to be in Legends..but Chrit..they dont accept the Wack
Signs out wen faced by facts..lost to Evolve & vowed to stay out of LLL
jus another Bitcher like Cam'...thinkin peeps giv a shit..ah well
its the final Bell in this match..& looks like ya Check in was True
coz wen I looked to find the definition of Rust..guess wot?..I found you

Trapt Wit 02-09-04 12:23 PM

Nice drop junior.

Votes?

Phoeniix 02-09-04 04:54 PM

shit was pretty enjoyable.

i'd say trapt took it. shit just flowed more nicely and came with the clever shit that connected well....BI...some of ur shit didnt connect too cleanly.

Ya style is weak as fuck, BI's truly behind the times
I mean shit remember 1-2...
...somehow you took 5 days for two lines

^ill

Now count ya blessings that I didnt slip ya last nick
You win.... This kids gotta be nuts
...the way he's always around my dick

^funny

good fun battle.

Trapt Wit 02-09-04 04:58 PM

^ Thanks for actually voting....

Damn near 50 views before someone actually posted something = (

B.I.Detained 02-09-04 05:25 PM

lmao @ his vote bwa bwa

Poppa Bean 02-09-04 06:02 PM

vote trapt wit

BI detained just kept talking about other people

like chrit and cam and evolve, it kinda took away from the verse

trapt was ok, flow was a little wierd but the punches were better

close battle

$pitacular 02-10-04 10:03 PM

I would vote but Brix won't let me LOL

Trapt Wit 02-10-04 10:39 PM

^^^
Still leave feedback

There's no poll anyhow

B.I.Detained 02-11-04 07:42 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by $pitacular
I would vote but Brix won't let me LOL


go die ya sad lil boy

$pitacular 02-11-04 02:26 PM

Well I was going to respect Bitch..er, I mean Brix's wishes, but since he doesn't seem to know what respect is, I will provide some TRUE and HONEST feedback despite his request:

Trapt - Although I can see you didn't take too much time (or take this battle seriously lol) your punches were personal and dead-on. The 'nuts' punch was slightly played but you illustrated Brix's 'sore loser/whiner' attitude well... which for me, personally, made the verse. Decent drop, consistant.

B.I. - I have seen a recent decline in your efforts lately, and this is just another verse that proves it. 'Just don't fit' and 'cut into bits'... 'Zoro' and 'Sorrow'... Jesus Brix... Didn't see one decent punch. MAYBE the 'Elephant Man' looks punch... kinda chuckled.

Vote = Trapt

and Brix, honestly, how can you say I purposely vote against you when CHRIT is the opponent? Just own up to your wackness and elevate or you will continue to slide downhill. That is all.

B.I.Detained 02-11-04 05:22 PM

lmao..so if the word doesnt sound anythin remotely to profanic you think its not a good punch?

Spit..your wack..peeps know it. & before I sonned ya ass ya was sayin i was one of the best on the site
now hop off & go die..like i said before.
post in here again and I will report you
now Die...sad sad boy

uppin


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