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D.U. 02-09-04 03:43 PM

Fire 2
 
honestly though yall really bout to rewrite all dem mufukn best on the site posts or wateva' u wanna kall'em, remember i said it

From the SOHK's, so Columbine wasnt new 2 me,
done witnessed dem hollows flyin' ova jew-el-ry/
seen how the blok done swallowed minds be4 puberty,
just like dem applebottom dimes after puberty/
these rappers are just fools 2 D, talk smack and lose yo teeth,
yall walk that but truthfully, yall follow rhymes and movie screens/
Ask who is he, ima nigga that'll pop a 9 at dudes w/ beef,
plus i drop proper lines and i move the beat/
cruise the skreet, ruger heat, but i'll really rather scrap,
but i'll brutally, bruise yo peeps, i neva hadda clap/
but put in that place and ima flame,
real recognize real, thats y kant put a face 2 yo name/
or vice-versa, i write murda, im the best plus i speak raw,
yea i seen the best on the site list and im requestn a recall/

PO lines :gfy:

In the hood i hustle for cream,
tell by my wrist, the queen's daughter wasnt good enuff 4 the team/

Dev 02-09-04 06:41 PM

thought this seemed quite forced in places... and didnt like the bit of same word rhyming, makes it seem like your limited... after your intro i was ready for illness, but ya failed to deliver .. an average drop on an average topic..... be more creative


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