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WORD~PERFECT 02-09-04 04:03 PM

training
 
Iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
spit rapid fire once the mic wire's is chambered......
there's no safety just the results of gun danger.
i spit clips with battle raps.....
you could rewind my qoutables on tracks-or wax-
pressing rewind is the only way you'll ever hear me retract
words back-
other then that-i envelope devastation and seal fates-
stamp your career comeback as wack.....
you wouldnt return with rebates.
99 percent of you is some tricks riding dicks-
industry bitch for m.c.'s spitten fake .
and that aint it..............
if you a fan of some faget that just makes you his remix.
now lets' here a you CENTZ!THEN MAKE THE REVISION-
nah you bitch i doggystyle rappers so play your position.
im ill with this my 104 fever-coughs 104 liters of eather-
make you my bitch.................
im twice as abusive like a 100 wife beaters in wifebeaters.
aint none of you ready for..........meta~phors-
compound lyrical cores-verbs broken to physical fragments.....
leaven compound frac~tures.
punchlines that physically reinact verbs-
i eat m.c.'s and leave them served-like hors'douevres.
i herbs...... and kill words with the ill flow-
websters will define NON CENTZ as an .
dont matter i PIONEER dope rhymes for mic fiends-
while your label only PIONEERS 15's.
you the gay type im real so talken bling-
fake as thug the only 12 gauge you know is a tongue ring.

fgee 02-09-04 04:56 PM

not bad
dunno if youre a bit rusty?
but this piece wasnt quite up to the levels i expect from you
still the multies and flow was good..as usual in your spits
wasnt seeing as many good metas that i usually do
and word play wasnt spectacular
still...
a decent read
peace n peep mine if u can

southsideloco 02-09-04 05:08 PM

Yo homie...like ive said before, u rhymes are ill n this one isnt much different...jus strait illness..like the vocab,wordplay was fire, n the flow was on point, no flaws as always...jus strait fire n dopeness..keep spittin to de fullest homie
check my drop>http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113216
n leave sum feedback...be much appreciated

Peace


Peace

Dev 02-09-04 05:13 PM

i think you pulled out another ill drop.... smooth and well worded, but id like to see sumthin differnet from you word!.... seens like your recent drops are all quite similar or nearly all.... still good, but like i say..... lets see it twin!

Split. 02-09-04 05:46 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by fgee
not bad
dunno if youre a bit rusty?
but this piece wasnt quite up to the levels i expect from you
still the multies and flow was good..as usual in your spits
wasnt seeing as many good metas that i usually do
and word play wasnt spectacular
still...
a decent read
peace n peep mine if u can


word

Otherwordz 02-09-04 09:53 PM

look at this wack ass mufucka...I'm back...for now at least...lol...this was good...but now as good as I remember ya soft ass used to be...we gotta hit up the collabz again sometime...damn soft ass nigga...holla...

[ $ ] 02-09-04 10:05 PM

yo this is a good read flowed well an stayed on point. meta an that were good but could be improved::cud ya hit my battle up wit a fair vote

LoCo 02-09-04 10:52 PM

haha wuts good nigga, come on for a minute and i see word still droppin fire
like usual..dope

UrbanReelist 02-09-04 11:10 PM

That verses was nice with on point multis nice wordplay nice vocab basically the shit was good and i hope you battle that guy you were dissin

WORD~PERFECT 02-10-04 08:20 PM

Thanks This Was Badly Rushed But I Will Re Up

SMZ 02-10-04 08:31 PM

Hard hitting - nice flow and vocab'. Only thing I can say is that most of the punches were pretty common. Thought the last four were the tightest and they're the most important - so nice piece. If you get a chance hit my "Broken Metamorphosis"


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