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Dev 02-09-04 04:27 PM

Stay!
 
Im from where im from and I belong to that place
It’s a matter of loyalty, and of head held grace
Ya own… in place… without support of societies head brace
Cos it’s a mistake, its flipped fake… don’t be a fool and partake
Yes I make my own rules and abuse as im seeing fit
Hell shit… one day im giving it up... quit…
The next im cutting the mirror with nostrils dripping quick
In a sense of bliss… with hits of euphoria
It’s a chemical love that distorts my cornea
Fits like a glove, on the hand of extenuated paranoia
It’s a formula I concoct that suits my living as I live it
Cos I know my own limit… trust me, cos its deliberate
Im inconsiderate… why not… the world does me no favours
So my behaviour reflects the times and they reflect in failure
It dipsomania for excitement… fuck the normal role
I want the whole not partial slice… I want the italic and bold
To hold and break the mould… not the price of moral standing
No… im commanding, grew with the locals… remanding
Myself in a culture one step behind, but in tandem
Only blind… but ive got the sight so get past the landing
Cos I’m planning… I’ll make the runway and depart for content…
Rid the torment… implement… but remember my roots
The 1E’s my cement and will remain without any dispute!

Penskills 02-09-04 04:54 PM

My dear friend Dev...you have always put up quality pieces one after another..Yet I fell as people over look your stuff..as good as you are..you deserve more props...so here it is...



Props

Gunman tha Great 02-09-04 04:55 PM

People always look over dope shit so that they can say 'i'm tha nicest i've seen on blabh blah blah' Dev always puts out heat. Good shit.

Dev 02-09-04 05:07 PM

thx... i agree recently my shit gets overlooked... its shit.... maybe co i been a bit inactive recently, but still... i reply laods...so... i dunno anyway... appreciated!

Gunman tha Great 02-09-04 05:10 PM

Well i enjoy reading ya shit so i'll reply and i'm penskills hero so he'll do anything i do (even though he beat me to it this time)

southsideloco 02-09-04 05:14 PM

yo homie...thats sum quality shit...nice wordplay, flow was on point, n the vocab was jus right...not to confusin but not to basic...sum nice shit homie..no flaws, jus strait fire,hope to see more in tha future n keep rhymen to de fullest, n if u got time peep my shit n drop sum feedback>http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113216


Peace

Dev 02-09-04 05:52 PM

quit sleepingz

ELEETE 02-09-04 06:20 PM

I agree DEV they do sleep through your peoples shit an I think it sucks for the most part. But this piece was good dawg props to you.....got respect for Emcees like you..........keep doin your thing an ill keep readin! Peep my latest piece out....its one of my best in eyes but its bein slep on....its called Foresight...(The Mirror).....thanks dawg keep doin your thing!

Dev 02-09-04 06:23 PM

i forgot before, but ill hit it at some point... thnx

Menik 02-09-04 06:24 PM

Yeah i agree this was a nice piece here.....i liked it, made a good read....the flow in this was good, it stayed on point through out the whole piece, pretty solid and smooth in it...good vocab as always from you....content was nice...overall a nice piece...keep at it.

FormulaMC 02-09-04 06:32 PM

Dev. . Just Like With Me, People Use Their Sleeping Bags Too Much. . Nice Shit Here, Vocab Was Good As Usual, Content Was Strong, Flow Was Smooth, Wordplay Was Nice, Everything In This Piece Was Strong. . Keep Dropping. . The Sleeping Won't Be For Long. . Pz.

Dev 02-09-04 06:52 PM

thnx Form...

Dev 02-10-04 03:01 AM

uppin.........

Otherwordz 02-10-04 04:00 AM

Dev...you'z a sexy mufucka...lol...this shit was hot right here...you was on point as usual...I can't fron't...y'all Englishmen got some vocab...keep bringin' the heat...holla...

Freeman 02-10-04 05:05 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by King of Thievez
y'all Englishmen got some vocab...keep bringin' the heat...holla...



^Indeed we do... :hump:

Good drop Devvy Boy...

Stop fucking hibernating and drop more hoe...

Your denying OM a good read... Which... Last time a checked... Is a serious offence... Your a fucking felon...

Please drop more you biatch... :thumbup:

Pz...


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