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Lust Vs. Testament
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10 Lines Due Tomorrow Midnight Get In Tonight Or Try |
yo both drop this shit in 45 mins aight?
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Word, Checking In.....................Try To Get It In Earliest Possible Tho
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Dogg, Dont State The Obivious, Cuz I Already..
..Know.. No Need To Tell Me That I'll Quote:
Im Blowing Away Lust, As If My Punches Were Winds Of.. ..Gust.. Cuz He Has Sexual Desire, You Getting Stomped On Like Earths.. ..Crust!.. Punches Hittin You Hard, Nother' Knock Out, Thats Right, Im.. ..Correct.. Dont Battle Me, Jus Duck, You Can Post When Your Punches.. ..Connect!.. I Woulda Had This Up As A 2 Minute Key, But RB Went.. ..Down.. Im Shattering This Kid, His Punches Keep Missing.. ..Around And Around.. This Is A Half Assed Verse, Wouldnt Be Surprised If You.. ..Won.. Your Not Worth 3 Credits, So I'll Lie To Make Happy.. ..This Was Only For Fun!.. Actually It Wasnt But Lie Happy, Get IT? |
your the replica nigga on the block who claims he tight but really hes herendous
im distinct you'll never find a MC more tremendous i gotta fetish for herbin nitches like you ur the old testament , IM THE NEW im hear to try and exstinct u like they did wit the jews you aint gunna beat me with ur played out remarks i'll put a mussel on ur ass like they do with dogs who barks put ur ass on the hush, dont pout i flow like a water spout, ill shread your ass wit out a doubt the lines i spit are nothing shy of perfect fuck this im out |
nitches = bitches my bad
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Dogg, Dont State The Obivious, Cuz I Already..
..Know.. No Need To Tell Me That I'll Quote:
Im Blowing Away Lust, As If My Punches Were Winds Of.. ..Gust.. Cuz He Has Sexual Desire*, You Getting Stomped On Like Earths.. ..Crust!.. Punches Hittin You Hard, Nother' Knock Out, Thats Right, Im.. ..Correct.. Dont Battle Me, Jus Duck, You Can Post When Your Punches.. ..Connect!.. I Woulda Had This Up As A 2 Minute Key, But RB Went.. ..Down.. Im Shattering This Kid, His Punches Keep Going*.. ..Around And Around.. This Is A Half Assed Verse, Wouldnt Be Surprised If You.. ..Won.. Your Not Worth 3 Credits**, So I'll Lie To Make Happy.. ..This Was Only For Fun!.. Actually It Wasnt But Lie Happy, Get IT? * = Corrections *= Lust= Sexual Desire **= 3 Credits A Battle Correction Completed And I Fixed The Quote Thing |
uppin for votes
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half-assed battle lmao. Even tho both of ya came crappy...my vote goes to Ill Testament.
why? Better punches and better verse overall. I like dat structure too...really highlights the punchlines. But anyways...even tho both had sum played concepts for their punchlines...atleast Ill Testament's were more creative and did hit harder. Lust...you came ok...but no disses that really made me go "dammm" tho. Anyways... v/ - Ill Testament |
oh i forgot...vote here. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113306
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aight this was pretty simple even though both verses were half-assed...
Flow-IT Multis-IT Vocab-lust Punches-IT Wordplay-IT Structure-tie (both choppy) Personals-IT aight so both can improved their structure...Lust you just need more better personals as well as multis...put them in whenever you can you know...definately learn how to use wordplay....you used like 2 "big" words...haha n they werent the greatest vocab...werent the greatest spelled either...plus hit hikm with punches period...i saw no punches that could touch anyone anytime...both elevate...aight...half-assed battle... vote- IT |
alright, well, ill, kinda weak verse for you, but not awful, some pretty good lines in there, good wordplay and creativity.
lust at first you came harder that ill, but then you lost it and your verses just got bad --ur the old testament , IM THE NEW pretty-- good line there but after that it got pretty terrible. vote-testament |
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