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Feeble Minded 02-09-04 07:31 PM

Com(4-6) vs. B.I. detained(1-0)
 
check in's by: wednesday.
verses due: friday, 12 am Eastern Time.
Read LLL rules. Read LLL announcement.
Agree on line limit in check in.

COM 02-10-04 03:59 AM

i signed out for a few weeks but i'll check in,,,,, fuck it...

btw... my record should be 5-6 after dimense no showed

Voted on Born 2 Kill VS Auspicious
Sand VS Jacent
Feeble vs Avalon

B.I.Detained 02-10-04 10:04 AM

Haha Finally..-In-

Voted-
MM Vs Trapt
Bribe Vs Razah
Aisle Vs Feu-Xion

COM 02-11-04 12:20 PM

Brixton? Detained? no matter what I'll maim your health
I didn't mean another alias "make a name for yourself"
Brixton's stopped on his quest when he hopped on this vet
So we can start on the right foot... I chopped off ya left!
I gotta lock on ya chest... you'll be rocked from the collision
Want an easy battle?... put yourself in my position!
No structure, no rythmn... you've got rehearsals to do
The only person you've beat's the only one worse than you!
I'll hurt your whole crew... you can't live... you can't advance
But the league is my Monopoly and I won't give you a chance
So I'll give you a glance... at the world through Puns eyes
When I up this battle... sit back and watch the Son rise!
Predictions by leth: Detained snaps when I stretch him
Brix is waiting for his death.... just check out his check in
The only place you fit in...is your coffin... fuckin nerd
Brix would be only be The Shit... if The wasn't a word!
You'll be embarrassed of your verse... before anybodys voted
You can't make your hand write?... at least a part of you knows it!




blah...match me fag...

B.I.Detained 02-11-04 07:06 PM

Render COM lifeless..sethers his Neck jus to giv me sum Head
yea COM was accepted bk in Wits End..now they finally Dead
theres nuttin that aint been said..bout how your Style has Declined
looks like COM finally decided..to Quit copying Mine
see my Rhymes the winning Line..yours even miss the Bonus ball
its True COM has everyones numbers..at a fucking Bingo hall
your part of the British Protocall?..now how Ashamed do I look!!
peep a couple of links in ya Sig?..honestly..we couldn't giv a Fuck
I wudda wished him G'luck..but he even Bitched in his check-In
understand..by Dimense not Showing..COM avoided becoming Resin
cremated defences..& he still cant COMpete or even COMprehend
Where your humour falls off..< he aint even tryna Pretend
create & Send..thats the only way you'll text & maybe get a Reply
but even Mobile Signals reject you..& get stuck in the Sky
37-9..maybe a nice play on ya record? Noobs N votin mean Shit
no Evidence found on Young P..but am sure ya Riding his Dick
so did you guys jus Click??..coz P's last 3 battles say ya did
am sure you'll say I talk shit..but I still excrete on children..Kid

COM 02-11-04 07:28 PM

hahah blah.... lets get some votes in..

SmokaJoka. 02-12-04 12:23 AM

u both came ok....BI had personals and u both had good punches here and there....and u both had played ones.....here's some quotables....

Quotables:
Quote:
Originally Posted by COM
Brixton? Detained? no matter what I'll maim your health
I didn't mean another alias "make a name for yourself"
^opener was dope....nice work

Quote:
Originally Posted by COM
I gotta lock on ya chest... you'll be rocked from the collision
Want an easy battle?... put yourself in my position!
^funny...lol...the two lines before ur closer were nice too

Quote:
Originally Posted by B.I.Detained
see my Rhymes the winning Line..yours even miss the Bonus ball
its True COM has everyones numbers..at a fucking Bingo hall
^funny...coulda been worded a bit better...

Quote:
Originally Posted by B.I.Detained
create & Send..thats the only way you'll text & maybe get a Reply
but even Mobile Signals reject you..& get stuck in the Sky
^LMFAO @ 2nd line....good punch

Punches - COM....had more witty hits
Personals - B.I.
Opener - COM
Closer - B.I....didnt get it at first...nice though
Enjoyment - Tie
Overall - u both dropped decent.....BI had alot of personals which is good...but u just didnt use them right in my opinion.....nice work though....COM had a few old lines....the left foot, monopoly, and sun rise lines were kinda blah....but overall he had a hard hitting verse....no hate...good work from u both...

Vote - COM

B.I.Detained 02-12-04 08:30 AM

0-1..kk thanx for the vote

Born To Kill 02-12-04 10:54 AM

Yeah...

Gotta give this one to Com as well...

Brix put up a helluva fight, nice personals...

But the name play is pretty played against him.

And alot of ya shit just didn't hurt, stung maybe, but didn't leave him reeling.

Com, on the other hand, came cruel.

Alot of what I like about battling...
(revenge and earning respect)
And alot of what I don't.
(does the world need more harsh feelings?)

I guess that's why I'm clearly not one of the best.

It's hard for me to hurt a fella without any beef.
I end up going for humor, I guess, or try to.

Com, well, maybe there's beef with Brix, cuz he really versed to hurt.

And did.

Quotables:

BRIX...

theres nuttin that aint been said..bout how your Style has Declined
looks like COM finally decided..to Quit copying Mine
AND
see my Rhymes the winning Line..yours even miss the Bonus ball
its True COM has everyones numbers..at a fucking Bingo hall
AND
so did you guys jus Click??..coz P's last 3 battles say ya did
am sure you'll say I talk shit..but I still excrete on children..Kid


Good shots, but mostly humorous, cept for the closer.

COM...

I gotta lock on ya chest... you'll be rocked from the collision
Want an easy battle?... put yourself in my position!
AND
No structure, no rythmn... you've got rehearsals to do
The only person you've beat's the only one worse than you!

(I suspect I know who he's refering to...if so, you're a little bitch!)
AND
So I'll give you a glance... at the world through Puns eyes
When I up this battle... sit back and watch the Son rise!
AND
The only place you fit in...is your coffin... fuckin nerd
Brix would be only be The Shit... if The wasn't a word!



Just too many quotables from Com, and too many of em were vicious.

Good win for Com.

Peace

Trapt Wit 02-12-04 10:58 AM

Com takes it.
Not even very close.... just a better verse period.
Brix needs to step it up if he expects to stay.

Mystery~murdera 02-12-04 11:14 AM

yea... Com is really gettin there. If u come consistently like this... you've arrived. Obviously com...

vote - com

Walter Wall 02-12-04 11:41 AM

Vote - Com

Com came pretty good

BI didnt

....simple as that

B.I.Detained 02-12-04 12:57 PM

pretty simple you're a prick walt^^^

Still cut up I knocked ya outta 1-2 huh
oh well!! thanx to other peeps w/ honest Votes

Wise Ways 02-12-04 09:52 PM

LMAO...someone just bit COM's verse
check this link out....lmao

http://www.urbanflows.com/forums/sh...&threadid=39124

^what a dumbass...

I'll edit in my vote...later

COM 02-13-04 04:13 AM

WTF??? i hate biting bastards...


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