Wise Ways |vs| crunch
 

12 Lines
Blind spits
Due 20 mins after we both check in
Normal rules

checkin in...u prob gunna crush me but ill get at ya

lol....you sure?
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you wanna do this?

this nigga walkin round callin him self wise ways
battlein niggaz like me he wont be seein many more days

the onli thing pleazin wise ways is the way young boyz cream
we got n r kelly nigga who cnt capolize on his big dream

so mah man sits on a website bitein shyt off ol gs
he goes to bed prayin every night just to b like me

original flow n the original lines keep on hittin
wise got that sweet look in his eye got lil boys shittin

so im a sit hear put mah dick in ur ear so u can hea when im cummin
dun get to excited b it aint b the guys im luvin

Kid got pissed off at a lu-ow..& still couldn't throw a punch
Nice name..making it true when I literally snap ya neck *crunch*
I'll touch you with two power lines..& leave ya ass in shock
Ya rhymes are cornier than flicks made by Alfred Hitchcock!
Fucking with me? what..bitch, son, fag, you new to this
& tha only time you seen pussy is coming out ya moms uteris!
Bet crunches punches are shit..don't expect more from a n00b
You a faggot & I'll expose that kind of like Janet Jacksons boob!
You made a mistake..you should of listened to yaself & declined
Cuz bitch this battle was over right after I typed tha 2nd line!

blah...keyed in 5 minutes...
didn't think this was going to happen

i don't really need to break down both your rhymes.....
wise ways won, his rhyme was way better, better flow, punches, everything, pretty much lop-sided
crunch...more "gay "rhymes about fags, work on strusture and punches and vocab
....keep at it....
return the favor

Well...this should take forever
*sigh*....#1.....

my vote goes to wise ways he murdered this kat, I dont really need to explain any more everyone should agree that wise ways won!

this nigga walkin round callin him self wise ways
battlein niggaz like me he wont be seein many more days
played punch
the onli thing pleazin wise ways is the way young boyz cream
we got n r kelly nigga who cnt capolize on his big dream
mad played bar
so mah man sits on a website bitein shyt off ol gs
he goes to bed prayin every night just to b like me
weak
original flow n the original lines keep on hittin
wise got that sweet look in his eye got lil boys shittin
weak...simplistic lines
so im a sit hear put mah dick in ur ear so u can hea when im cummin
dun get to excited b it aint b the guys im luvin
sex shit is mad played


Kid got pissed off at a lu-ow..& still couldn't throw a punch
Nice name..making it true when I literally snap ya neck *crunch*
played...but OK punch/personal
I'll touch you with two power lines..& leave ya ass in shock
Ya rhymes are cornier than flicks made by Alfred Hitchcock!
ok
Fucking with me? what..bitch, son, fag, you new to this
& tha only time you seen pussy is coming out ya moms uteris!
played..ok twist
Bet crunches punches are shit..don't expect more from a n00b
You a faggot & I'll expose that kind of like Janet Jacksons boob!
played again...but ok
You made a mistake..you should of listened to yaself & declined
Cuz bitch this battle was over right after I typed tha 2nd line!
played..ok

Damn Both came with played lines all over...and thats not like Wise Ways from what I've seen before...But WIse took this cause his lines were not as played as the sex shit Crunch came wit..And he also had some goos punches/personals.metas mixed in...Crunch came alright...but not original enough

Please drop an honest vote herew guys..Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112459

crunch =

this nigga walkin round callin him self wise ways
battlein niggaz like me he wont be seein many more days
rubish, r u diddin your self??
the onli thing pleazin wise ways is the way young boyz cream
we got n r kelly nigga who cnt capolize on his big dream
lol, kiddin right
so mah man sits on a website bitein shyt off ol gs
he goes to bed prayin every night just to b like me
no comment
original flow n the original lines keep on hittin
wise got that sweet look in his eye got lil boys shittin
shit
so im a sit hear put mah dick in ur ear so u can hea when im cummin
dun get to excited b it aint b the guys im luvin
shit

wise =

Kid got pissed off at a lu-ow..& still couldn't throw a punch
Nice name..making it true when I literally snap ya neck *crunch*
ok opener
I'll touch you with two power lines..& leave ya ass in shock
Ya rhymes are cornier than flicks made by Alfred Hitchcock!
ok
Fucking with me? what..bitch, son, fag, you new to this
& tha only time you seen pussy is coming out ya moms uteris!
played but lol
Bet crunches punches are shit..don't expect more from a n00b
You a faggot & I'll expose that kind of like Janet Jacksons boob!
nice
You made a mistake..you should of listened to yaself & declined
Cuz bitch this battle was over right after I typed tha 2nd line!
very ture, good last line

ok no need to break it down, wise takes every cato, to be honest ya beat him with the first punch!!

vote = wise ways

PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOUR ON THE BATTLE UNDER MY SIG!!! THANKS

no need 2 break it down.......wise wayz no doubt........ most of crunches shyt waz played.....hiz best line wuld probably b hiz cloer.....mostly fillers.
wise- good shyt.....i c u didnt need 2 go 2 hard.......lol....datz all i got 2 say....
vote- wise wayz......(dun report dis ).....lol
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111358
plzeeeeee peep dat up^..thnx

im not going to breaqk this down.........it is an obvious waste of time..wise ways clearly merked this newb in any category that can be thought of..you think of and he merked him in it..poor noob better luck next time..i suggest wacknees emergency center

v/wise

wise ways, nice verse, but i've seen better from you,
punches was aight should of tried harder, i know you just
lackin off just playin wit this guy, structure was decent,
not much to say about it, closer was dope, but to many people
are killing closers like that stuff like it was over in so and so line,
next time throw some personals in their dawg, but dont focus
on personals cause than you forget to throw sonme punches in
their.

crunch, your shit was aight for a noob, you still need to learn
more bout personals, and multis, you focused to much on your
punches, and they were still weak, most of your punches were played,
like most people said, you should try battlin some one like me, not go
straight to battlin some one like wise ways ya know, keep elevating though.

my vote: wise ways

hit this up, everyone is sleeping on it, its been open for like a week.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111274

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crunch:
this nigga walkin round callin him self wise ways
battlein niggaz like me he wont be seein many more days
an atempted punch ... half decent...4/10
the onli thing pleazin wise ways is the way young boyz cream
we got n r kelly nigga who cnt capolize on his big dream
r.kelly lines played...gay twist was corny..not a good line 3/10
so mah man sits on a website bitein shyt off ol gs
he goes to bed prayin every night just to b like me
not good again...coulda did much better with that set up 3/10
original flow n the original lines keep on hittin
wise got that sweet look in his eye got lil boys shittin
didnt pan out as well as you wished....3/10
so im a sit hear put mah dick in ur ear so u can hea when im cummin
dun get to excited b it aint b the guys im luvin
2 total opposite lines not good...didnt make sense...set up was ehh..3/10
overall you had ok flow....dont seperate your bars...sreucture was OK...PUNCHES need work...wordplay need work....personals werent there....overll 16-50

wise:
Kid got pissed off at a lu-ow..& still couldn't throw a punch
Nice name..making it true when I literally snap ya neck *crunch*
decent punch,personal ...7/10
I'll touch you with two power lines..& leave ya ass in shock
Ya rhymes are cornier than flicks made by Alfred Hitchcock!
decent...alfred hitchcock is the shit tho! 5/10
Fucking with me? what..bitch, son, fag, you new to this
& tha only time you seen pussy is coming out ya moms uteris!
haha...cool line...funny...decent punch/fake personal maybe 7/10
Bet crunches punches are shit..don't expect more from a n00b
You a faggot & I'll expose that kind of like Janet Jacksons boob!
cooll....use the janet lines while u still can!!lol...6/10
You made a mistake..you should of listened to yaself & declined
Cuz bitch this battle was over right after I typed tha 2nd line!
good closer....nice punch....ok personal if he was debating the battle...7/10
overall....good strucutre....you obviously win this with your punches, wordplay, personals on his name........just a better overall....waste of a nice verse.....goo job tho.....
vote - wise