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Open Mic Slept On? (Quick Keystyle)
Ladies an gentlemen!!! Welcome, to Open Mic On RB!! Lets’ go, Welcome to OPEN MIC, the place where your shit gets slept on Gets stepped on, watch while MC's struggle for acceptance But the only exception, are those "thought" worthy of mention While some of the greats get swept under the light of attention There’s no appreciation or place for MC's like us here The real MC's who pour out their soul through their tears! It’s sad to see such a place become a waste of space Put your pieces up for others thoughts, but get lost wit no trace What the fuck is the deal? Do I spit rhymes wit no grace? Has my face been erased, disgraced an been replaced? I guess it seems I don’t got what it takes to make it Wish I could take hold of the issue an make ways to change it That’s why I think this site is on a downhill for talent You don’t know what you have but when its gone you wont have it The acts of people like you will make this site deceased That’s all I wanted to say thanks for listening........peace And that’s it........this is how i feel........stop sleeping on shit!!!...your discouraging the talented...fuck it you probably wont even see this drop cause it’ll be slept through..... ....grab a pillow you fuckin bitches!! Think about what I said...... In fact sleep on it........haha! |
Hmm~~~nice...nice quick key...(mine doesn't get slept on..I'm lucky...although I get stepped on!!!!!)..LMao...
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i belive people who talk bad about RB usually get banned
go figure |
So true...
Everything does get slept on... Lucky a dont sleep that often... Im sure ive got insomnia... O well... Nice drop man... Good for a keystyle... Flow was only thing wrong really... Keep it up... Pz... |
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Banned? Yea aint it sad that you got limits an boundaries for your art? |
Well I'm kinda new on here and I gotta do this by the time limit at the library since my family and I are homeless, but I do notice alot of the good stuffs get overlooked for simple beefs. One
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^^Uppin^^
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Nice piece. Flow seemed on point to me. Vocab was suitable but could be elevated a bit. Also I think you could of expanded a bit on your point - but that's me - the general feeling seems to be that works should be kept to under 20 lines. Personally I think you're better than some of the people you admire. Keep it up.
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^^Uppin^^
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Once again uppin
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Nice verse you got there it had okay vocab and ya right open mic does get slept on and they prolly won't bann you for ya verse since they don't even look at the open mic forum.
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a very accurate portrayl of OM @ RB
which is why i http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113500 |
nice work again ellete, ok flow and good structure, well worded, good piece overall!!
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^^Uppin^^
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Bloody amazing...
i back ya! got a laugh out of reality there like! but some of the illest get mentioned, others dont. |
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