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Project Black - "No Lights On"
www.soundclick.com/projectblack
My krew project black Verse 1 - Traphfik (me) Verse 2 - Kanine Verse 3 - Kanine |
peepin...
return the favor bro... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113505 --------------------------------- #1 where u at in canada... i saw that on the soundclick page.... I live in toronto.. ------------------------ nice beat... i'm feelin this fa real... your verse is pretty nice, deep lyrics... flow could be better, but mostly on point.. u said "me an' my mom always beefin".. or sum shit, i jus' used like the same line in a rhyme, i'd say u bit, but i ain't uploaded it.. lol... delivery/emotion was nice, u were puttin' it in tha right place... 2nd man.. his flow is not as good, but still nice... lyrically, he got a more up-beat style, deep, but simple, with nice multi's... delivery he has more presence.. but basically even... peace |
yea i'll peep it in a bit...i live in toronto 2.
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undefinedOK on this track it was hot all the boyz on the track did there thing :thumbup:
I would like to battle y |
no that ok i dont wont to battle u to good for me :shocked: undefined
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Traphfik=your flow is tight but sometimes you have to much to say in the amount of time given.............. the lyrics are good but some rimes are laccking at some places....and work on your backs because they are not always with your original line....when you mix your track together just lower the sound of your back and it will show less.......but nice shit men
Kanine=Flow is okay but your losin it sometimes like at teh beginning of your 1st verse....your going too fast...........delivery is very dope especially when you get your second verse.... I can really feel the emotion..... seriously nice shit both of you plz return favor thxs peace PIC |
thnx uppin'
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whoa..
that beat= slick as shit.. 1st cat: quality =not that good.. flow is ok.. delivery needs confidence...thats all.. --could really go without all the "gyeah" shit in the song-- 2nd: quality is much better... flow is very unsure...sounds too much like u readin ya lyrics... lyrics are good..u have good content... you just need to find a comfortable way to spit ya concepts... -lovin the samples decent track... keep building... |
i've heard at least a dozen rappers online use this beat..which is the only reason why i never dLed it..first verses lyrics were aiight..2nd verse lyrics are kinda off..yeah..they're off..who mixd this?..they did it wrong..3rd verse comes in alot better..this verse seems like its the emcees fault hes kinda offbeat..eh..all in all..i cant realy say much about this cuz the beat itself is so stale to me..
pZ |
yeah.....alright here we go
first verse: weak has no excitement or emotion... second= you cant rap....way off beat 3rd...listening now....hmmmmmmmm even worse....no delivery stop rapping....whack project im out |
hmm I just dont know
does everybody have this beat?...I got this beat a long time ago, but hated it for the simple fact that, that bitch is singin' no lights on the whole time...when I listened to this song, I was too distracted by the backround to pay attention to the verses....whe nI finally did, I heard some cats that need to practice before they record, one of them needs to work on they're timing....this needs work.
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