Lyric v. Ambitious
 

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I never plagurise but in this case you can say I bite rhymes....
I'll chew this Lyric up and spit the garbage out in Front Lines
I'll take your keys for myself, like crookid cops off the shelf...
U welcome no help, but I had to save u from humiliatin yourself!
Too late to skate, thought he spit fire when he baked a cake..
He's aprin fake, Martha Stewart for halloween what a mistake to make!
No heat in ur kitchen, u'd better look into that make it your mission...
Cuz w/ no ambition to fix it, ur outta luck cant even call the technician!
I bleed words, stab this herb Lyric in the head and then let the ink run....
Put a heart in his chest to write with cuz his brain is unable to think from!

Ambitious to battle me..jus another newb imposter
You roll with Executives? You aint even on theroster
No love between us..Shoulda made this a pink slip
Cause you know what they say...
...Absence makes the heart grow fonder bitch
New Jersey rep...Nothing there except polution at its worst
If I told you to put your best foot forward..
...Youd fall down head first!
Lookin at ya avy your gettin merked..turn that grim reaper south
I was gonna call ya rhyme whack...
...But ya rhymes took da words outta my mouth
Got so disrespected as Tech...had to change your name this time
I'll kill 2 birds with one stone ...Uhh... I mean 2 MCs wit 1 rhyme

I never plagurise but in this case you can say I bite rhymes....
I'll chew this Lyric up and spit the garbage out in Front Lines
ok to open...nothin too special....6/10

I'll take your keys for myself, like crookid cops off the shelf...
U welcome no help, but I had to save u from humiliatin yourself!
hmm..no...2/10

Too late to skate, thought he spit fire when he baked a cake..
He's aprin fake, Martha Stewart for halloween what a mistake to make!
no..didnt like...3/10

No heat in ur kitchen, u'd better look into that make it your mission...
Cuz w/ no ambition to fix it, ur outta luck cant even call the technician!
dont really see as punch..referring to your other half...4/10

I bleed words, stab this herb Lyric in the head and then let the ink run....
Put a heart in his chest to write with cuz his brain is unable to think from!
nice closer...8/10


Overall for Ambitious...23/50



Ambitious to battle me..jus another newb imposter
You roll with Executives? You aint even on theroster
lmao....those damn executive...7/10

No love between us..Shoulda made this a pink slip
Cause you know what they say...
...Absence makes the heart grow fonder bitch
..wow...horrible wording..just horrible...1/10

New Jersey rep...Nothing there except polution at its worst
If I told you to put your best foot forward..
...Youd fall down head first!
kinda sorta played...5/10

Lookin at ya avy your gettin merked..turn that grim reaper south
I was gonna call ya rhyme whack...
...But ya rhymes took da words outta my mouth
lol..kinda played also but good nonetheless...6/10

Got so disrespected as Tech...had to change your name this time
I'll kill 2 birds with one stone ...Uhh... I mean 2 MCs wit 1 rhyme
very nice ...simply nice....damn..10/10

overall for lyric.......29/50



Lyric wins...much better punches..
closer straight merked people...damn..
just was more consistent and creatvie...peace

i say lyric why?

lyric-
ya shit was gud.. not your best but gud you had some descent punches and you had overall good werd play.. but some off it was a lil off.. but overall gud verse definnally

Ambituous-
didnt feel ya shit at all.. you barley thru any punches.. the verse was more about how good you are and stuff really.. didnt feel your verse at all i thought your shit was a as whack as horse shit... It would be a gud open mic tho.. really it would

Punches- Lyric
Personals- Lyric got it with
"Ambitious to battle me..jus another newb imposter
You roll with Executives? You aint even on theroster"
Wordplay-Ambituous lyrics was okay but some was ehh

flow-Ambitious
multiez-Ambitious
punchez-didn't really see any
personalz-lyric
meta4'z-Ambitious
opener-Ambitious
closer-hmmm..close...but I'ma have to say Lyric
overall-Ambitious

I wasn't really feelin' Lyric's verse too much...although the closer was pretty good...the rest of the verse was just blah...on the other hand...this ain't by far the best I've seen from Ambitious...but he had a more consistant verse...and his closer was pretty good too...

OMG what a funny battle!

Lyric: you are really talented, i liked the style, kinda similar to what tilleyedie used on me, very cool. Your ending was awesome, had me laughing. I agree with game time though about the 2nd line, but overall very nice.

Ambitious: great rhymes, very nice too. Your rhymes were more...basic. But they were affective. the crooked cops and closer were your highlights..

Overall, this was a very even battle, and i think that after reading it over again, i'd give it to Ambitious, simply because i think his overall rhyme hit harder...everything else between you 2 evened out. Great job to both.

Vote goes to Ambitious.

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never plagurise but in this case you can say I bite rhymes....
I'll chew this Lyric up and spit the garbage out in Front Lines
ok bar
I'll take your keys for myself, like crookid cops off the shelf...
U welcome no help, but I had to save u from humiliatin yourself!
na, wasent feelin this
Too late to skate, thought he spit fire when he baked a cake..
He's aprin fake, Martha Stewart for halloween what a mistake to make!
yea, ok, not bad
No heat in ur kitchen, u'd better look into that make it your mission...
Cuz w/ no ambition to fix it, ur outta luck cant even call the technician!
umm ok aswell
I bleed words, stab this herb Lyric in the head and then let the ink run....
Put a heart in his chest to write with cuz his brain is unable to think from!
rubbish close

Lyric =

Ambitious to battle me..jus another newb imposter
You roll with Executives? You aint even on theroster
nice personal
No love between us..Shoulda made this a pink slip
Cause you know what they say...
...Absence makes the heart grow fonder bitch
nice
New Jersey rep...Nothing there except polution at its worst
If I told you to put your best foot forward..
...Youd fall down head first!
um ok personal, not punch
Lookin at ya avy your gettin merked..turn that grim reaper south
I was gonna call ya rhyme whack...
...But ya rhymes took da words outta my mouth
ok
Got so disrespected as Tech...had to change your name this time
I'll kill 2 birds with one stone ...Uhh... I mean 2 MCs wit 1 rhyme
lil played but good finish

ok to start with the flow of the spits goes to "am" and also dose the structure, but the punches and personals go to lyric, thats why my vote is lyric for betta punches and personals thruout spit. good close battle tho!

vote = lyric

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Ambitiouse
I never plagurise but in this case you can say I bite rhymes....
I'll chew this Lyric up and spit the garbage out in Front Lines
-self punch,metiphore = 4
I'll take your keys for myself, like crookid cops off the shelf...
U welcome no help, but I had to save u from humiliatin yourself!
multi,-confusion = 3
Too late to skate, thought he spit fire when he baked a cake..
He's aprin fake, Martha Stewart for halloween what a mistake to make!
multi,-corny = 3
No heat in ur kitchen, u'd better look into that make it your mission...
Cuz w/ no ambition to fix it, ur outta luck cant even call the technician!
mulit,self personal = 4
I bleed words, stab this herb Lyric in the head and then let the ink run....
Put a heart in his chest to write with cuz his brain is unable to think from!
punch,punch,wordplay,metiphore = 7

Not good aside from the closer which I liked. My opinion you need to kill the 2 multi's in every single line and focus more on punches. The only personal you had that I had seen was the one about you own alias. Work on that.
Overall = 21
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Lyric
Ambitious to battle me..jus another newb imposter
You roll with Executives? You aint even on theroster
personal,punch = 7
No love between us..Shoulda made this a pink slip
Cause you know what they say...
...Absence makes the heart grow fonder bitch
-flo,punch,-filler = 4
New Jersey rep...Nothing there except polution at its worst
If I told you to put your best foot forward..
...Youd fall down head first!
personal,-wrong,wordplay,punch = 6
Lookin at ya avy your gettin merked..turn that grim reaper south
I was gonna call ya rhyme whack...
...But ya rhymes took da words outta my mouth
personal,wordplay,punch = 7
Got so disrespected as Tech...had to change your name this time
I'll kill 2 birds with one stone ...Uhh... I mean 2 MCs wit 1 rhyme
personal,metiphore,personal,wordplay,punch = 8

Good drop, slightly better than OK. I enjoyed most of it, However it did seem as if quite a few times u filled the end of first line wit BS just to make it ryhme wit your second bar. You did this in your last bar, but the last line was very nice, had a little bit of everything in it. Good Job.
Overall = 32
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Vote = Lyric