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Then and Now feat. Credz
Then and Now .:K:. Then and now, is not the question more like… ………… when and how?…… do you know your elevated to the maximum… ………your skills will allow….. everybody starts out a newb, lonely like a stray with no1 to help.. but with role models and idols move on to greater things in themselves… the past for me was shit, back then I was shit, …………but I’m man enough to admit-it………… but like jelly in a mould, I adapted to fit-it…. Its like a test for me now pushing my skills to the limits… It takes along time to be the best…. …….you don’t deserve it….if you get it in minutes… lets just all take a second to reflect on are achievements... disagree with above?..i don’t give a fuck… …..cause this wouldn’t be rap without disagreements…. Credz I remember when I was ok, when nothing would hurt me at all… Always thought there was just no way…until all the facts fall… Got my heart against the back wall, these lies just shaped me… Slowly they came over me like a window and just draped me… I soon found out that most people I knew constantly lied a lot… But I tried and got nothing but depressed and I cried and rot… I was slowly decaying away, to the heartless person I am today… Always replaying the days, to see wrongness with what you say… Many things happened in the past, things I wish I could of changed… Don’t know how long I can last, only if my life could be rearranged… ............nice man.............................pz |
^feedback plz..............pz
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decent collab here
liked the first verse better than the other seemed to have a bit of rawness and originality to it 'Its like a test for me now pushing my skills to the limits… It takes along time to be the best…. …….you don’t deserve it….if you get it in minutes… ^ill liked the whole thing flow etc blah blah liked both the rhyme schemes too seemd to work well credz your verse was cool as well but seemed to lack a bit of substance.. writers voice so to speak needs to improve to get a beter message across to the reader |
Yeah Thanks, I Just Wrote It Quick, But Im Working On It :)
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This was really good.
.:k:. your line bout gettin there in minutes was really deep and meaningful.....your best line. flow was on point and was really creative CredZ yours wasnt as creative but the flow was there. Overall still really good but not as deep as .:k:.'s. Good collab. Hit up the link in my sig for my open mic please! |
Good you two...
Ma boys... Lol... Good enough drops by the pair of you... Dont show favouritsm... So... To contradict myself... You both sucked... There... :)... Keep it up... Pz... |
This was Okay :) <-this will be my new reply to all credz's work
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.............yey yey thx alot yall credz nice collab man.....................pz
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dope verses. props for them both. the multies were nice. the complexity was
well enough and the structure was good, stronger in Credz though. you both had ur strong points but i'd say they were equally great. the topic was pleasing. im sure EVERYONE can relate to that state no matter how good they are now. props on that. keep tight. hit this up in return plz: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...d.php?p=1175745 pz |
thx man.........pz
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.....................feedbak plz......pz
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nice drop by both yall in this collab........both of ya flow was nice both had a gd use of multis and wordplay..both were structured well 2........
my fav line off .:k:. was 'Its like a test for me now pushing my skills to the limits… It takes along time to be the best…. …….you don’t deserve it….if you get it in minutes… ^^dope my fav line off credz was Many things happened in the past, things I wish I could of changed… Don’t know how long I can last, only if my life could be rearranged… liked this line came from the heart lol nice drop by both ya |
good drop by both of you...
both had strong verse saw a lil multis very good collab here but I know both of you can do way better... keep at it... and get better lol j/p hit up these oms... ....Dead..To..Live.... and _.::-No Luck I-::._ |
.coo..........pz
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