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Born to Kill, For Real...
"What we need is love, wisdom, and compassion for one another..."
How could Bobby Kennedy say that shit, after losing his older brother? I couldn't be that forgiving, so you'll have to excuse my revenge... Hurt me or my family and I'll drop rocks on you like Stonehenge. This is as close as I get ta gangsta, but I ain't reppin shit... Just protecting my own in my home, puttin ya preacher at his pulpit. You'll never see it comin, pull back tha sheet and find a fake me... Bulletproof windows and doors lock down, release gas for you ta breath. Lungs sieze, cuz cyanide's hell on a fool's respiratory... Systematically speaking, fuck with me and that's ya story. Cuz it don't take size or numbers or even gats, people... Brains build body counts and put relatives under steeples. And I've got more than you, like a come to life Lex Luthor... So if power feels like a buzz then I'm in a drunken stupor. But don't be scared, I'm not here ta strike fear like kingpins... This is just a warning, don't step ta fight cuz ya can't even weigh in. |
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^ so simple and some thing every one in the world knows..Yet the hardest thing to follow..another great work by my favorite Om'er..this was short and sweet~~~I really liked your intro the most..and you last line was powerful...cool fonts...bye..(he's really old!) |
Did you get laid off? Pension not clear? Hip acting up?
Cause you seem pissed!!! Nice flow through out, vocab was lacking..some nice ones here and there but on a whole it was a little above average...i know you can do better sides that this was good, i just cant relate cause...well...i just dont care about the kennedys |
Love that shit Born To Kill, good drop dawg, like penskills said it was simple and everyone knows it but it is hard to follow, good shit, nice drop............................
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Thanks for liking it, Pen and 7...
Many thanks. And many props back. Realist... Naw, not angry at all. Just seen so many gangsta rhymes lately in Open Mic... Thought I'd answer with one of my own. But, like it says... That's as close ta gangsta as I get. Peace |
I liked the first line
Wasnt feeling the subject matter too well but still nicely executed Good flow here. Average to good drop overall. If you get time check "mindtrap"'s lil open mic diss |
Funny, Chrit...
The first line is the one that's not mine... Har dee fuckin har! |
good topic...i understand where ur coming from...but..
truthfully...i wasn't really feelin it ....i guess cuz i see this more as poetry... but good job none the less |
Thanks, 13th...
Peace unto you, my man. |
very dope drop right there. the complexity for such simplicity was compelling.
the flow was nothing less than great. the lines worked well, the consistency was nice. pretty much everything came together to make a nice work of art. even the metas were great. keep at it man. its good to see katz like you are still on here. this is my new gay alias. since Ace of Spades was banned. keep at it. hit up my "Beginning's End" if you have the time. pz |
My man, Ace!
There ya are, you motherfuckin vet, you! How ya been, man? Hope all is well. Peace Glad ya liked... I'll return tha favor. |
This kid is real nice, i like your anger homie keep it up
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