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Mindtrap 02-11-04 01:55 PM

Corrupted Visions - Sorry Kids
 
You know ya fucked up when Acro's doin a diss
Shoulda never pissed of TR, complaining about a bitch
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T to the motherfucking R
Corrupted who? Sadly you're not within my view
Never leaving impressions
Forced multies do nothing to enhance your crew
Nor can rowing lessons
This verse is abridges, for the full length was cold
Destructive and savage
Establishing dominance in collapsible microphone
Yet still cant get established

Mindtrap
Sorry kids but you know ya sunk as soon as these bars hit
And ya femcee's only a fantasy
...too men who prefer underdevoleped europeans with hairy armpits
You dumb shits, ya punches dont hit... in fact they always missin
I mean ya leader is more of a dumbfuck, than sex with Jessica Simpson
Yes this is an alias... But I'll still destroy you with my lines
Then Credz will have a name change...
...like after Trapt ripped him the first time
I know a bitch tore ya up. But Credz, try to come whole hearted
Cause after I school ya crew I'll be amazed
...if you can even get the bus started
And Fantazee we know ya weak... and aint noone want to hit it
MT knows every trick in the book...
... and you've got 3 chapters in it
And quit complaining in legends. I'm getting tired of this dumb whore.
I mean ya crew isnt even legendary.... on a fucking E-Z Board
Your the reason OM is slept and snored... and now ya all rattled
Scared as fuck, knowing one of ya faces me in the crew battle

Never piss us off kiddos

FanTa ZeE 02-11-04 01:58 PM

Well, that wasn't very nice. i haven't even said anything against him and it seems i was the main target...damn.

oh well..i guess i'll get over it, time can be a great healer..

also, those lines weren't politically correct, i wasn't 'complaining' to try and get my CREW in legends, i was standing up for those slept on deservers, and i get called a whore. I am really depressed. Honestly. You couldn't have even widened your vocabulary? I'm totally ashamed.

LMAO

lunatic 02-11-04 02:01 PM

this is striaght :evilgrin:

Edicius 02-11-04 02:07 PM

LOL

Mindtrap is pissed?.. haha

I know a bitch tore ya up. But Credz, try to come whole hearted
Cause after I school ya crew I'll be amazed
...if you can even get the bus started

HAha lol, some good, punches,. & wp , flowed good, .. nice diss, to read.!!!

Born To Kill 02-11-04 03:02 PM

Best shot was that "bus" one...
Made me chuckle.
The "Jessica Simpson" one only furthers my point...
That she's probably the only bitch I'd leave my wife for.
I love that dumb, hot as fire, blonde haired airhead.
(^^^ say that three time really fast!)

Nice vocab by TR, but I didn't vibe with that rhyme scheme.

Overall...

I wouldn't call it a merk...

But it was a damn nice beating.

Peace

Penskills 02-11-04 03:09 PM

LOL..this was very nice...LOL...Trapt had some nice punches..


I mean ya crew isnt even legendary.... on a fucking E-Z Board
Your the reason OM is slept and snored... and now ya all rattled

^that was dope~~

southsideloco 02-11-04 03:44 PM

yo....liked the drop..had sum very good n funny punchlines...both did a great job n did wut they could on the topic..props to both o yall..the whole drop was good except for the structure..got me a bit confused but its all good cuz yall came wit good punches n flow so keep rhymin to de fullest

Peace

Trapt Wit 02-11-04 04:40 PM

That Mindtrap kid is decent

Trapt Wit 02-11-04 07:50 PM

^^^
He makes a good point

Nic Caesar 02-11-04 08:26 PM

umm your all the same person lol...LOL i get it tho

but this was actully kinda good ... the punches was nice but the flow was terrible...
couldn't catch ya scheme for shyt but i got the point thats all that matters... he was above decent by an inch but it was a good read... keep goin it

oh yeah return the favor in my piece dunny yet... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...831#post1176831 ...

Caesar - On3

Trapt Wit 02-11-04 08:29 PM

^^^

The flow is there if you read it right

Topic 02-11-04 08:29 PM

i must have missed something....What did we do to get dissed? this is weird. We arent a battling crew anyways. well this was an allright diss i couldnt cath the flow either.. had some nice puches as stated above. I wasnt dissed in this which i guess is ok but otherwise decent diss

Trapt Wit 02-11-04 09:52 PM

^^^^

Credz is to blame for that.

Mr.Christensen 02-11-04 11:32 PM

cant catch my flow?
stop reading, start rapping

uppin

if you want to know why im mad at credz:
Theres a girl he likes, and i told him to tell her
hes like 'fuck no'
so for acting dumb, he gets dissed

Trapt Wit 02-11-04 11:39 PM

^^^
And I support that whole-heartedly


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