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X-Acutor29 02-11-04 03:21 PM

X-Acutor29 Vs. Massacre30
 
This is our 2 of 3 battles this is how it goes:

Since your a noob 8-10 lines
3 days for posts
1 day for verse

X-Acutor29 02-11-04 03:32 PM

I'm the child prodigy.

I’m finally back from my oddessy.

When ever they see me they throw a party.

Don’t start with me.

You wanna know why I’m going to win.

Because the chances you are is non to slim.

I will burn you even if I was asleep.

Give me a mic and I become a freak.

Wats wrong you too scared to speak.

You got to the top of the mountain and I’m here to throw you of the peak.

X-Acutor29 02-11-04 04:03 PM

in line six it should say: Because the chances you are is slim to non .

massacre30 02-11-04 04:38 PM

i see your tryin to use bigger words
this isnt school you fukin nerd
in line six i think you were right
you compared to me you dont even put up a fight
Does anyone got a light?
so i can smoke this little bitch
your equal to an itch under my armpit
since your record is gonna be 0-3 soon dont throw a fit
why im i wastin my time on this fruitcake
you said you threw me off a peak i drowned you in lake

YOzLyricalKilla 02-11-04 05:06 PM

idk both was weak but i feel massacre had way better flow, punch lines were iLL, but was a bit simple.....~X~ not good you tried to use to many big words like massacre said its not skool if your gonna use big words put then in better metaphores you have no good punches and your flow was so lame......v=Massacre


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