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OliverClohsoff 02-11-04 05:25 PM

KiLLa_CaLi vs OliverClohsoff
 
You know da rules 30-45 minutes after both check inn 10-16 lines
no hate
no crew
no dr
no feedin
no bitin
no recylin

check in so i can start keyin dis is my check as wellll :evilgrin:

KiLLa_CaLi 02-11-04 05:41 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by OliverClohsoff
You know da rules 30-45 minutes after both check inn 10-16 lines
no hate
no crew
no dr
no feedin
no bitin
no recylin

check in so i can start keyin dis is my check as wellll :evilgrin:




Aight.. Im in.. 30 to 45.. g'luck

OliverClohsoff 02-11-04 05:45 PM

aight u too immma start keyin now....................

OliverClohsoff 02-11-04 06:14 PM

My spits are like art hence mah nick name Mister Vincent Van Gough
Too bad i didnt invent glasses cuz i still cant seem to find Cali's flow
Killa Cali ur ass aint nutin more den a fag who is still learning how to spit
Can sum1 plz hook killa up wit sum accuracy cuz his punches dont seem 2 hit
But the sperm does cuz he always has stains left on his double chin
Bitch da only thing ur ever killed was ur flow and chance to win
Please help us all out by makin an actual flow by goin to rhymezone.com
Beacuse ur punches are more used den da condoms u used on ur own mom
I saw ur last battle, and i'd like to say please enough with the quotation marks
Forget about ur mom, bitch u couldn't even get laid by a blind bitch in da dark

KiLLa_CaLi 02-11-04 06:22 PM

:shoot:


I'm Reversing the Normal Just by Serving The Chef..
everything Straight all but his Sex..Twist Oliver's Text..
Torn Like Wet Paper this faker gets Cut like shick Razor's..
Im sick of Bitch Haters..they Smashed Like Mashed Taters..
Re-arange Ya Features By taking you A-part
And still thinkin you Smart when your Looking Like Potatoe Head..
Im callin the Plays Im'a Hit N' run..Just Like Jose Cansacoe Did..
Similar to Whites in College Hill..Kid your Getting Left Out..
Drama's too Intense for you..so Mommies Tit Just Popped Out!
Played Pre-writ boring Flow..This reminds me of your's Son
Your Just a UseLess Presence Like a Kid left outta Four-Sum..
I'ts an OxiMoron your Lyrics a Raging BoreSome..
I know this Kid and he's White..So it's Easy To Snort' Em..

OliverClohsoff 02-11-04 06:29 PM

aight im not white so i dont know where u got that from ..........uppin numba 1

<~*1*~> 02-11-04 06:55 PM

good battle boyz real close but i was feelin olivers shit...........hey oliver when i get a opening i wanna battle u let me know holla..........1

Malice 02-11-04 07:53 PM

yo dis was honestly a pretty good battle... hard to choose who actually won.. but im gonna vote fo ~Oliver~!!

I feel like he had wittier and well structured punches... his flo seemed to be about the same as ~killa~ but just came across harder. ~killa~ u had some pretty decent lines an i liked ur but i think u coulda came a lot harder. sorry man, based on flow, punched, wit, an overall good vocab~ i vote for Oliver

OliverClohsoff 02-11-04 07:58 PM

thanks for da two votes guys and 1 i will battle u later....uppin number 2

Daz 02-11-04 08:15 PM

blah....weak battle mayne....

oliver took this basically...Killa_cali you got potential kid but you need to work on better punches...you had him in everything but punches..and we all know punches win battle..go to WEC and look at punch formats and ish...you could be very dope...in ths battle you were not...neither was he though....just less wack ish...therefore..

v/oliver

lil' tagger 02-11-04 08:21 PM

I think daz said it best when he said very weak battle, I think OliverClohsoff(very good name) lol took this battle because he had the better punches. Killa had some good shyt but not as strong i think the best line you must of had was ur opener but still Oliver came with a better closer, so therefor my vote goes to Oliver.

lyricallyabusive 02-11-04 08:31 PM

oooo.......weak battle......very one sided.......oliver took this eazillllyyyyy
1) moma jokes r played
2) killa- werk on ya flowwww

punhces: oliver
flow: oliver
structure: tie....both were good
creativity: oliver
strength in punches: oliver
vote: oliver

-Zone Out- 02-11-04 08:36 PM

Killa's verse
I'm Reversing the Normal Just by Serving The Chef..
everything Straight all but his Sex..Twist Oliver's Text..

Nice opener good play on his name..
Torn Like Wet Paper this faker gets Cut like shick Razor's..
Im sick of Bitch Haters..they Smashed Like Mashed Taters..

another decent punch..it connected in my opinion..
Re-arange Ya Features By taking you A-part
And still thinkin you Smart when your Looking Like Potatoe Head..

ehh..this was a weak punch, next time dont rhyme the last word of your set up line with a word in the middle of your punchline..
Im callin the Plays Im'a Hit N' run..Just Like Jose Cansacoe Did..

err..Im thinkin did was suppose to rhyume with head..but..the meta 4 in this line was decent..
Similar to Whites in College Hill..Kid your Getting Left Out..
Drama's too Intense for you..so Mommies Tit Just Popped Out!

I liked the set up, but the punchline was..err..:wtf:<-----that explains it..
Played Pre-writ boring Flow..This reminds me of your's Son
Your Just a UseLess Presence Like a Kid left outta Four-Sum..

good, you finally redeemed yourself in this punch..good job, you were starting to fall-off for a sec..
I'ts an OxiMoron your Lyrics a Raging BoreSome..
I know this Kid and he's White..So it's Easy To Snort' Em

uhh..fake personal..weak closer...

Oliver's verse
My spits are like art hence mah nick name Mister Vincent Van Gough
Too bad i didnt invent glasses cuz i still cant seem to find Cali's flow

ehh,..weak ass opener, semi-weak punchline..
Killa Cali ur ass aint nutin more den a fag who is still learning how to spit
Can sum1 plz hook killa up wit sum accuracy cuz his punches dont seem 2 hit

weak set up.. decent punchline..
But the sperm does cuz he always has stains left on his double chin
Bitch da only thing ur ever killed was ur flow and chance to win

one of the best punches in your verse..kinda gay though..
Please help us all out by makin an actual flow by goin to rhymezone.com
Beacuse ur punches are more used den da condoms u used on ur own mom

somemore played shit..but average punch..Ive seen better from you..
I saw ur last battle, and i'd like to say please enough with the quotation marks
Forget about ur mom, bitch u couldn't even get laid by a blind bitch in da dark

nice closer..better than Killa's..so..you get points there..

overall..I will have to give this shit to Killa, more consistent punches..but...since Oliver is my crew I cant vote..but all I got to say is keep elevating..both of yall..and Killa..come try-out for my crew..peace..

BABY NY 02-11-04 08:46 PM

oliver you recked his bitch ass hard
like when a train hits a car hes all crunched up and flyin to pieces

OliverClohsoff 02-11-04 08:50 PM

lol^^ thanks to every one who voted and fuck u dixe i mean krogenicx...lol jk'in uppin number 3


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