..The Exodus..(Must Peep)
 

Inhale Glut Reaper…

Cascades of talk faded into non-paraphrased chatter..
Masquerade sadness as pure happiness scattered..
Good or bad? The latter a mad-hatter clashing with Alice..
As her Wonderland palace becomes a castle of malice..
Eyes dance within balance, as my equilibrium falters..
Lies assault truth where people are living in falsehood..
Season wounds with salt from this earth's oceans..
As words spoken lacerate pride with cursed motions..
Flocks perturbed with heard notions of death wishes..
Stopping meshed physics locked in debt to deaf English..
Missing the blisses of scientific glyphix under writing..
As verbal thunder's shying to the lightning underlying..
I'm done with climbing hope in kaleidoscopic of plains..
When the notion in vain is the point poking the veins
Comatose in the waves, slain in the ocean of pain..
As my brain foliage wanes at me in the toll of the slain..
I’m alone, but I maim a bludgeoned man owning my name…
Pointing bloodied hands as the cornucopias blamed?!?..
Boisterous claims feign placement in stars of the solar..
as tongue evades a prison behind the bars of my molars..
I’ve discarded shards of eccentricity by martyring polars..
Now targeted by death never meant to be off of its sonar..
I’m stopping this tour of my oratory parting as a guard..
because my rep is at stake like the heart of alurcarD..

…Exhale Soul Sold…


Peace
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