"If I Die Now......."
 

If I die now my momma would cry/
they sleeping i wouldn't get a chance to say bye/
If i die i would be better in heaven/
I ain't suffer as bad of a dead as the people from 9/11/

that was the chorus at the top

People say that They~Hate~Living but they Eat~At~Thanksgiving/
Man I want there to be a Life~I'm~Reliving but i'm trying to be last on the line of judgement Like~A~Seiving(Surname)/
I Pray~Almost~Everyday i'm trying to take all the titles like a fat person At~A~Buffet/
But God please bless the Place~I~Lay but I hope It's~Not~Today/
the people I wanna bless most is my Grandma~And~Mom feel like i'm stuck in a dark hole like when They~Caught~Saddam/
I hope they catch him with That~Nuclear~Bomb my style hard to pronounce like mispronouncing the Capital~Of~Vietnam/

chorus

to be continued..... Just a little keystyle

Um... it's ok but you left me looking for more. I think you should try to make it longer in the future. I mean you hit some complex topics there but just gave them a brief overview. And could you explain your closer to me - I can see that you intended it to be clever but I'm not getting it. Keep writing. Hit my "Broken Metamorphosis" if you can.

Uppin' for this

yeah yeah i agree with first dunny... if you got somin like this... keep goin at it... don't just stop an ish... u gotta produce the whole skit dunny... just don't drop off with a "continue" skit... i mean it was like 5 bars?? no no dunny... wackness.. come with more to this then post up... no half ass shyt... cats don't like it much... just helpin you out dunny...

Peep Out my piece/Return the favor... H.E.l.l. u will see what i mean...

Caesar - One

Dying~While~Relying on my Time~To~Rhyme/Commited~Many~Lyrical~Crimes/I deserve to go to Heaven~And~Shine//
With~Lord~God/I~Will~Pray/While i'm stuck In~This~Pod/hoping to Live~Another~Day//
If I~Really~Stay/i'll try To~Be~Good/serving cats losses Like~a~Tray/Try to take my mom out~The~Hood//
I try And`Be~Humble//Drop my bad habits Call~It~A`Fumble/forget wrestling, fighting with myself is A~Royal~Rumble//
Soon I'll~Be~Movin/call it a hypothesis/It ain't a fact till proven/until then i'll Live~With~This//
Inoocent People~In~Jail/Living~In~Poverty/Can't~Pay~Bail/ But the po-po ain't all wrong defendants make Chillin'~A~Hobby//
See~What~Happens/A~Nigga~Snitch/a thug Get~The~Clappin'/ the same nigga that clapped witnesses it And~Gets~Rich/
God didn't~Want~Me/To~Die~Early/especially not By~A~Fatality/The world ain't right Now~You~See//
This Finshed time To~Say~Goodbye, to think about it I don't know what would happen If~I~Die//

fade out with chorus...

uppin' for this thread

well you got skills man...don't believe everyone. If they can't outflow you then you aint supposed to its cool to read what you'd go through

uppin'

Uppin' for my rhyme