FanTa ZeE vs Fo-Real
 

10 - 12 line

Blind Spit

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20 mins after check in to drop

Let the best emcee win ; good luck.

checkin in

Yo
This aint yo fantasy but i'd love to lick ya from yo head to yo toes...
but i i i i i love deese hoes, who think they rhyme and got mad flows,
so like z you last in line, gettin killed by most kats wit half a rhyme,
but whit half da time, i'll tear ya up and welcome ya to the U.S.,
cuz this english s done i'm already wonderin WHOS NEXT?
old and busted, yo rhymes is rusted, my rymes so much firepower leave ya whole block dusted,
stealin road signs &, mailboxes, fill ya room wit concrete,
now yo go around tellin errebody you STREET
rhymes is ovah i left what a stitch but i dont hit women so i'ma slap dis BITCh

So you thought FanTa would fall to your badly constructed verse?
The first line that you spat, the whole board just dispersed!
Don't wanna be tortured, so they flip and hit the reverse
Cursed with the power to rhyme bad? this 'emcee' is the worst!
I put 'emcee' in inverted commas, cause really, what you are
Is just some washed up old punk rocker, trying in vain to reign a star!
Watch as he strains, wracks his brains for half a bar,
Or one line to make an impact, but his words won't get him far
Ever heard the phrase? FanTa 'ZeE', FanTa Do?
Trying hard to maintain; when i'm rapping the crap out of you!
So put down the mic, or your gonna get laughed of stage!
I'm making a fortune in this game..and your still earning minimum wage!

uppin this pleez vote with honesty...how y'all feeling?

This battle was a fun read i guess.........Congrats on Fo-Real for not using any sex phrases on FanTa....This was close an i almost gave this to FR but your structure made your rhyme hard to read at some points.......your finisher was nice

now yo go around tellin errebody you STREET
rhymes is ovah i left what a stitch but i dont hit women so i'ma slap dis BITCh--Nice but watch 4 the streched out lines....

FanTa your flow was smoothly executed an was easy to read.....Some of your punches had me laughin....
Ever heard the phrase? FanTa 'ZeE', FanTa Do?
Trying hard to maintain; when i'm rapping the crap out of you!--HAHA
Ive seen better from you but you did well here........
Very good job for to the both of you an FR watch ya structure dawg.......peace

Vote: FanTa ZeE

thankin you..

uppi for votes, get this closed so i can keep moving on up!

vote vote vote...

honest votes.....

way!!!!!

Big It Up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113988
vote there^^^

Fanta takes in liked tha sturcture, personals, eveyrthing....pretty close but structure is wht helped fanta

ThA Ce

Shit was weak....very onsided....Fo-Real came with some weak ass shit...played rhymes...lotsa filler....the works.....Started out his line by saying he wanted to lick his opponent? Whack
Fanta also had some played lines and filler....but he aslo had some nice punches in there...not an all that bad verse...I liked the line:
"So put down the mic, or your gonna get laughed of stage!
I'm making a fortune in this game..and your still earning minimum wage!"
Thatw as good... VOte=Fanta

PLease drop an honest well explained vote here...Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113978

uppin again come on come on, my fave song just been on MTV base

Aight...well, this battle, both sides, was played with almost every line:

"so like z you last in line, gettin killed by most kats wit half a rhyme,"
line - rhyme...not happenin

"So put down the mic, or your gonna get laughed of stage!
I'm making a fortune in this game..and your still earning minimum wage!"
I read this on this site.

Fanta had the flow, and less filler than fo real. Fo real, you gotsta make sure there is a reason for every line, a punch, personal, somethin. It was a nice try with the Luda parody tho.

Vote - Fanta Zee

break dun:

flow:Fanta
structure:fanta
punches:Fanta
personals:erm...Fanta

One sided...Fanat wins

check this battle...1 more vote needed til end

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...879#post1180879