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Provoke 02-12-04 05:39 PM

MaDa vs Provoke
 
10 lines.. 30 mins..
Blind Spits..
Good luck

Provoke 02-12-04 06:09 PM

Damn.. kid, read the rules.. you've now got four open threads
I checked your last posts.. I guess I'll take the d/q win instead
Fucking herb.. your name.. your whole persona.. you're a mess
I wouldn't even battle you.... but my mind could do with a rest
If you were on point, you'd get skewered. Your best hope is a ban
Mada has a most unusual birthmark.... it says Made In Taiwan..
You're that run of the mill kiddo.. laughters really all you're inflicting
I'll cane you dropping more half-assed than severe burns victims!
Just gimme my win man.. so I can get that much closer to elevated
Mad already lost.. when his mom and the damn elephant man mated

MaDa 02-12-04 06:16 PM

....Opener....
After this Battle your More *Fucked-Up-Than-Roofus*
I'll *Upper-Cut-Its-Ruthless*
so Your *Upchuckin-Your-Guts-while-Shoeless*

I can *Manage-My-Threads*
Flat out Retarded - Like I *Hammered-Your-Head*

....Finisher....
I *Open Attack* Your *Hopes-Get-Smashed*
I Know how to *Hold-my-Half* But *Provoke-Collapsed*
Like Usin a Lighter - He's a *Joke-to-Match*
Help this *Lonesome-Lad* Drop from a Tree with *Ropes-Attached*
You'll hear *Unspoken Laughs* as you *Choke-and-Gag*

Provoke 02-12-04 06:58 PM

Uppin..

$pitacular 02-12-04 07:25 PM

OK this was a horrid slaughter... Provoke, niice drop. Good wordplay, punches, personals, had it all. Made this thread worth readin. Matter of fact, why don't you drop this link in our tryout thread if you are interested:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112362


Mada - Wow. Elevate man, pleeeeeaaaase. The flat out retarded/hammer punch was ok though. other than that, garbage.

vote = Provoke.

drop an honest vote here

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113854

Chugs4Life 02-12-04 07:38 PM

wow Mada your whole verse was whack sounded like you where just trying to throw around words that rhyme. You had a couple multies ill give you that but other wise..... horrible....

Mada Nice punches, flow, Structure, personals ect.. easily took this hands down .

Overall - no need to explain mada takes this one, probably a merk.

Chugs4Life 02-12-04 07:41 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Chugs4Life
wow Mada your whole verse was whack sounded like you where just trying to throw around words that rhyme. You had a couple multies ill give you that but other wise..... horrible....

Mada Nice punches, flow, Structure, personals ect.. easily took this hands down .

Overall - no need to explain mada takes this one, probably a merk.



oops supposed to say

Provoke Nice punches, flow, Structure, personals ect.. easily took this hands down .

and overall - no need to explain provoke takes this one, probably a merk

my bad i just lost alot of blood kinda light headed heh.... got hit in the nose with a basketball

Provoke 02-13-04 08:59 AM

Uppin x2..

Straight Ace 02-13-04 09:11 AM

No doubt..Easy decision.
A complete merk by Provoke..
Funny verse..good punches & real nice wordplay.
Obviously elevated far beyond Frontlines..
The 'half-asses' line was dope..creative.
Mada..that Taiwan line killed you..
& u didnt do anything to fight it really..
You came extremely weak & uncreative..
& puttin shit between " " for no apperent reason.. " " are meant to indicate wordplay.
Which u obviously did not, (well maybe a slight attempt) included.
Overall a clear win for Provoke..
And it needs to be said..Rufus is the shit!

Provoke - vote..

MaDa 02-13-04 09:16 AM

Good job. Maybe we'll have to rematch someday.
I won't come half assed next time trust me lol.

Take it easy

Reborn2687 02-13-04 09:40 AM

Easy to decide this one

Provoke - You had nice punches, a few personals with nice flow and meta's......very creative verse

Mada - Erm.....no real punches, personals or creativity but you had an attempt at wordplay. Fix your structure

OVERALL - provoke

I cant poll yet coz I aint got 100 posts so you'll have to make do with my comment

Provoke 02-13-04 02:39 PM

Uppin x3..

Provoke 02-13-04 03:16 PM

Uppin x4..

Provoke 02-17-04 07:20 PM

Uppin x5..


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