hardhitter VS mc aines
 

ightt u wanted it 10-15 lines
ill spit 1st no feeding
3-0 knock out or 1st to 5 wins
no crew votes
no hate votes
check in..........

ight check check no more than 15 lines or u will b dq'ed

ok no feeding........................................... .....keying right now

ight then imma start keyin ma shit now then gd luck nugga

I aim for mc anises' brain then let him hang from ventricle veins
Pencil his legs, til' I stencil his frame.. I told him he was wack-
-n' that's what he became
Whos back is this fag attackin, til I wipe out my ashes from cigarettes
Hoistin him weak, "The Voice Of The Streetz"? dude, it's the internet..
I tell him to duck, he'd lunge his feet, I get paid for shit he dun for free
Alls I wanted to do was Sonn you.. but rb already gave me custody..
We've had beef for awhile now, but hes from England-
-We know how these faggots are
n' you wanna talk original? Look at your fuckin avatar!..
wow, these rhymes inert.. n' looks like my time hurts
I told him to drop good, so he copy n' pasted my verse!
Herb.. it stops here.. done, through, ya diein dude
He disabled his record.. n' I've seen your shit-
-n' I agree, I would too if I were you.......

Blast this mard winnin faster than blind's Last-In-Cherades
I thought weight watchers chocalate was weak till I saw hard-hitters-barz
Ram & scrape ya abusin ya son like ya father raped ya
Only time hard hitter cumz rough is when he wanks on sand paper
Bowl the fag and hit a strike like puttin holes in baghdad
Similar to firin dicks from mac's my punches leave ya with a swolen ass
Search for verses cause u aint serving no1 like dirty nurses
Ur lines are borin' like playa's chat up lines every gurl in a skirts heard it
Murked the fake U lack a future like I burned your fate
Its heavy Vs light Bitch like fat cunts to the scales U need to learn your weight


uppin this shit 4 votes

IGHTT UPPIN THIS MO FO..............LEAVE A LINK AND ILL HIT IT UP..........uppin#1

hardhitter
I aim for mc anises' brain then let him hang from ventricle veins
Pencil his legs, til' I stencil his frame.. I told him he was wack-
-n' that's what he became
-vocab,punch,wordplay,multi,punch,-stretched = 5
Whos back is this fag attackin, til I wipe out my ashes from cigarettes
Hoistin him weak, "The Voice Of The Streetz"? dude, it's the internet..
-metiphore,personal = 3
I tell him to duck, he'd lunge his feet, I get paid for shit he dun for free
Alls I wanted to do was Sonn you.. but rb already gave me custody..
multi,-played,wordplay,-played = 3
We've had beef for awhile now, but hes from England-
-We know how these faggots are
n' you wanna talk original? Look at your fuckin avatar!..
personal,personal,-played = 5
wow, these rhymes inert.. n' looks like my time hurts
I told him to drop good, so he copy n' pasted my verse!
multi,-self hype,-played = 3
Herb.. it stops here.. done, through, ya diein dude
He disabled his record.. n' I've seen your shit-
-n' I agree, I would too if I were you.......
mulit,punch,personal,punch = 6

Good closer. But that was about it. Your lines have been used 100x. Very very un-original verse. Hence, the only original one got the highest score. Avatar personal can be used again and again and not be played, but you didn't put effort into the punch to make it any different from another avatar punch. The whole Son concept is way past played, actually I used a line quite similar in a battle you voted on earlier. As for the copy and paste, we all know computer concepts are played. Be more original.
Overall = 25
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mc aines
Blast this mard winnin faster than blind's Last-In-Cherades
I thought weight watchers chocalate was weak till I saw hard-hitters-barz
metiphore,punch,punch,wordplay,-flo = 5
Ram & scrape ya abusin ya son like ya father raped ya
Only time hard hitter cumz rough is when he wanks on sand paper
multi,punch,metiphore,-played,wordplay = 4
Bowl the fag and hit a strike like puttin holes in baghdad
Similar to firin dicks from mac's my punches leave ya with a swolen ass
metiphore,punch,punch,multi,metiphore,-flo = 5
Search for verses cause u aint serving no1 like dirty nurses
Ur lines are borin' like playa's chat up lines every gurl in a skirts heard it
multi,-played,-flo = 3
Murked the fake U lack a future like I burned your fate
Its heavy Vs light Bitch like fat cunts to the scales U need to learn your weight
mulit,metiphore,-wrong,metiphore = 4

Another extremely played verse. I've seen it all before nothing really original. Also you were wrong, he isnt a light weight he is a middle weight. The whole serving concept along with the cum lines are played to the max. Be original. Work on that.
Overall = 21
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Vote = hardhitter

LMAO

mc aines talk shit too me

bwhahahahahahaha

that verse was horrible...HORRIBLE

hard hitter beat your ass and hes not too great

so if i was you, i would never talk shit to me again,

cus i will make you look really dumb

hahah canu vote this tho thanx...................................

poppa bean ur a wack emcee i wud murk u easy.......hard hitter may of taken me in this battle but it aint over wit yet......even if he did props 2 him every 1s gotta lose sum time and may b mine mite b now im not botherd if i get a loss.........so fuck u poppa

uppin #1

although i dont like mc aines

becuz he acts newbish its all good ima still vote fairly

count it if you wish

hard hitter

I aim for mc anises' brain then let him hang from ventricle veins
Pencil his legs, til' I stencil his frame.. I told him he was wack-
-n' that's what he became
-lol not too bad, good wordplay

Whos back is this fag attackin, til I wipe out my ashes from cigarettes
Hoistin him weak, "The Voice Of The Streetz"? dude, it's the internet..
-hahaha, yup that was dope

I tell him to duck, he'd lunge his feet, I get paid for shit he dun for free
Alls I wanted to do was Sonn you.. but rb already gave me custody..
-ha

We've had beef for awhile now, but hes from England-
-We know how these faggots are
n' you wanna talk original? Look at your fuckin avatar!..
- newbish right?

wow, these rhymes inert.. n' looks like my time hurts
I told him to drop good, so he copy n' pasted my verse!
-played
Herb.. it stops here.. done, through, ya diein dude
He disabled his record.. n' I've seen your shit-
-n' I agree, I would too if I were you.......
-weak closer

mc ainis

Blast this mard winnin faster than blind's Last-In-Cherades
I thought weight watchers chocalate was weak till I saw hard-hitters-barz
- that didnt rhyme at all

Ram & scrape ya abusin ya son like ya father raped ya
Only time hard hitter cumz rough is when he wanks on sand paper
- weak/played

Bowl the fag and hit a strike like puttin holes in baghdad
Similar to firin dicks from mac's my punches leave ya with a swolen ass
-wtf that was shit

Search for verses cause u aint serving no1 like dirty nurses
Ur lines are borin' like playa's chat up lines every gurl in a skirts heard it
- uh. moving on

Murked the fake U lack a future like I burned your fate
Its heavy Vs light Bitch like fat cunts to the scales U need to learn your weight
- eh, halfway decent closer

vote hard hitter for being way doper

thanx hommie............................................ .....1

LMAO

i would merk you





you fucking NEWBIE

:)

`ok here it goes.....
hardhitter
I aim for mc anises' brain then let him hang from ventricle veins
Pencil his legs, til' I stencil his frame.. I told him he was wack-
-n' that's what he became
(ok nice opener,came hard)
8/10

Whos back is this fag attackin, til I wipe out my ashes from cigarettes
Hoistin him weak, "The Voice Of The Streetz"? dude, it's the internet..
I tell him to duck, he'd lunge his feet, I get paid for shit he dun for free
Alls I wanted to do was Sonn you.. but rb already gave me custody..
(this was ight but,was kinda weak)5/10

We've had beef for awhile now, but hes from England-
-We know how these faggots are
n' you wanna talk original? Look at your fuckin avatar!..
(nice kinda basic but,nice way to use his advatar against him)6.5/10

wow, these rhymes inert.. n' looks like my time hurts
I told him to drop good, so he copy n' pasted my verse!
(this was pretty nice,but also kinda played)
5/10

Herb.. it stops here.. done, through, ya diein dude
He disabled his record.. n' I've seen your shit-
-n' I agree, I would too if I were you.......
(not a bad coser,but not the best either...u could of came harder)6/10
final score :30.5/40

mc aines
Blast this mard winnin faster than blind's Last-In-Cherades
I thought weight watchers chocalate was weak till I saw hard-hitters-barz
(didn't get it)3.5/10

Ram & scrape ya abusin ya son like ya father raped ya
Only time hard hitter cumz rough is when he wanks on sand paper
(that was better)5/10

Bowl the fag and hit a strike like puttin holes in baghdad
Similar to firin dicks from mac's my punches leave ya with a swolen ass
(nice one,lmao)7/10

Search for verses cause u aint serving no1 like dirty nurses
Ur lines are borin' like playa's chat up lines every gurl in a skirts heard it
(that was ight nice flow)4.5/10

Murked the fake U lack a future like I burned your fate
Its heavy Vs light Bitch like fat cunts to the scales U need to learn your weight
(ok the fat jokes are played)4/10
final score:24/10

overall i think this was a weaker battle than it should of been.
mc aines:ur structure was ight,but punches,flow,and all was a lil off.
i know ur better than that as i saw some very nice battle verses from u in other battles,but in this one i dont know what happened..?

hard hitter:came with a nice verse punches,flow,and structure was all good with a few personels u had a nice verse good job u won this battle!


vote:hard hitter