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carlosbarrett 02-12-04 06:25 PM

Whatever yall
 
Lately you claim my rhymes are basic
My rhymes are as basic as the bible in arabic
But I'm not after compliments
This is nonsense
I hear your curses cause we aren't copies
But like the IRS you can't stop me
Haters hate
But I'll never stop like a mirror's reflection in another
You want me to be something I'm not
Where I live you get or get got
It happens alot
Doubt it and live in your box
Where your thoughts are reality and nothing else
You don't have to buy a dozen eggs
To get 12 shells
Out on bail
Court imminent paralysed in useless movement
Fuck NIKE I can't do shit
The badguy always loses
Cliche and legend are true
Its like explaining to a child the Kreb cycle

Nic Caesar 02-12-04 06:32 PM

"Lately you claim my rhymes are basic "

Who ever said it... didn't lie... simply put... kid you have nice concepts u show talent... but.. your structure is wack... no real complexity (seems like somebody told your vocabulary book)... it just wasn't good... no dis... just helpin out...

Peep B.I. , Freeman, Emerge , Penskills, i dunno... Cats that kill at open mics... u will see the light... yep... and SMS ... an my post... H.E.l.l. just some examples... Yep

Caesar - On3

carlosbarrett 02-12-04 06:42 PM

yeah ok man...I have yet to read your stuff...but I will


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