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ManDIbus VS RASCAL
no rules 10 barz u spit 1st
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drop before 00:20am
40mins away......... Jus start keyin now we'll drop about the same time! g'luck. |
1bar is equal to 1line....
Checkity check in...... |
actually 1 bar is 2 lines
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MaNdiBUS it might be hard to diss you bcus i only no your name,
nah i chew up emcees like you thats how i got my fame, yup look in my sig thats whos to blame, my punches are like your face gaurantying people pain, dnt question my potential im a burning falme./ This is just another Win on my battle record, damn my second punch and your already floored./ im sure im rite in think this is your first battle thread, so ima end your career quick with infa-red to your head, aiight time to say goodnight with my last bullet to your head./ |
Ightttttttt
That was trash god and ya style is shit, u couldnt beat ManDibus if it was tatooed to ya dick// my flows are ill, punchlines ridiculous, I spit so sick niggaz like u catch syphillis// lyically ,metaphorically you not ready, cut u open like a blunt, disconnect you air tubes wit a machete// ManDibus is nice, Punchline precise, you claming u can eat me when u cant count barz right// I spit nutrients to soul let it seap through, your nowhere near me, 2/3 of ya wins were by dq// now do u really wanna battle, I'll crack open ya adams apple and drink the juices like snapple// looke i aint even comin at u 4real, lyricall you'll get killed, none can compare to mandibus neva have and neva will.................// MUTHAFUCKA |
1hour and 10mins later of pre-writing and you drop well done...........
didnt you wanna make the deadline? uppin......... |
nothin but key stlye trust it or not i hads other shit to do i said 10-20 min and u said 40 so within 40 min shit came up so whateva fam....................
UPPIN!! |
That was trash god and ya style is shit,
u couldnt beat ManDibus if it was tatooed to ya dick// that line said it all lol |
MaNdiBUS if you said 10-20mins why didnt you spit in that amount of time?......
uppin Newayz keep uppin tha battle |
it took me 6-10 min to write that,
i had some hair cuttin to do, 2 heads to be exact so that took awhile i was ready when i posted so this was your fault but anywayz uppin |
yo...luv the battle..was nice..both o yall came wit sum nice punches...nice flow, it looks like to me mandibus took this win tho cuz he came wit harder punches...especially the intro...That was trash god and ya style is shit,
u couldnt beat ManDibus if it was tatooed to ya dick// ^^^that punch right there took it...but i give props to both o yall cuz yall did wut u could but mandibus came on top Peace Vote-mandibus |
yo yall come on and vote for this and get this out the way peeps
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need more votes peeps holla at dis battle stop sleeping
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RASCAL
MaNdiBUS it might be hard to diss you bcus i only no your name, nah i chew up emcees like you thats how i got my fame, personal,punch,-self hype = 3 yup look in my sig thats whos to blame, my punches are like your face gaurantying people pain, dnt question my potential im a burning falme./ -self personal,metiphore,punch = 4 This is just another Win on my battle record, damn my second punch and your already floored./ -filler,-flo,-wrong = 0 im sure im rite in think this is your first battle thread, so ima end your career quick with infa-red to your head, aiight time to say goodnight with my last bullet to your head./ -contradiction,punch,-repetative flo = 1 Well lets see, You started weak and ended flat out horrible. Im sorry I don't really have anything nice to say about your verse. In that last bar you contradicted yourself by saying I kno and then I think and then you ryhmes head to head. All I can really say is focus more on making sense than anything else as of right now. Then work on your punches and creativity. Overall = 8 ---------------------------- ManDIbus That was trash god and ya style is shit, u couldnt beat ManDibus if it was tatooed to ya dick// -feed,-played = 1 my flows are ill, punchlines ridiculous, I spit so sick niggaz like u catch syphillis// -self hype,-played = 0 lyically ,metaphorically you not ready, cut u open like a blunt, disconnect you air tubes wit a machete// -structure,metiphore,punch = 3 ManDibus is nice, Punchline precise, you claming u can eat me when u cant count barz right// -self hype,punch,-fake personal = 2 I spit nutrients to soul let it seap through, your nowhere near me, 2/3 of ya wins were by dq// metiphore,personal = 5 now do u really wanna battle, I'll crack open ya adams apple and drink the juices like snapple// -filler,multi,metiphore,punch,-structure = 3 looke i aint even comin at u 4real, lyricall you'll get killed, none can compare to mandibus neva have and neva will.................// -structure,-self hype = 0 Not very good. It's a toss up between both of you, we'll see what the number's say. Anyways, You talk to much about yourself, more like you were battling a self glorication mirror rather than RASCAL. You need to throw more punches. Overall = 14 - 4(4 extra lines) 10 ------------------------------------ Vote = MaNdiBUS |
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