I am afraid.
 

Does absence make the heart grow fonder?
Thus passions take a start and go farther!

I miss you, every last part of your being
I would act out for everyone if you are seeing
Where are you, I wake up alone at night
Searching the covers, alone and in fright
Dream of you as my security blanket
Cover my fears, shielding me quick
Ignorance is bliss, do I contradict
Life without you encompassing me
Dream a little dream of me...

I dream of you and I don’t want to wake
Someone asked me a question today...

What’s your biggest fear?

lol..is that lady divinity in your avy??
is this about her?..lol

tight...lmao..
nah but..this was ok i guess..
with my interpretation of this...i'd say ur fear is like being alone or some shit..
so its coo....^correct me if im stupid..
anyway..this piece is kinda short to really get into..so
ill just say that the concept's examples can be more original..
dont knkow what i mean?..sorry.if u dont...but peace....


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114002

peep it
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114002

dont worry about it too much
but thanks for your reply

Short and to the point man .. dope .. I liked the way you took the idea a lot .. the shortness didn't take away from the piece in this one man .. this had a lot of true felr lines in here ..


Dream of you as my security blanket
Cover my fears, shielding me quick


But that line there was the one that had me .. I thought it was dope man .. very real and recognizable .. nice piece here again man .. keep writin .. one

Nice..short and sweet..so is my reply...^^

Dope stuff...

Not rap, though.

This is poetry.

And it's very good.

Deep.

Expressive.

And slightly creepy if you've started stalking femcees.

But whatever works for you, man.

Peace

its real...content good...not complex or anything but just expressive as stated above...ok peice

RiZ

LOL...thank you for reply
and i did drop this in poetry forum
i just put it here as well