Marvolous~playa vs ..Syck..
 

10 lines.. due in 10 mins (reposted thread)
you should have had plenty of time already
no dickriding/unexplained votes
no feeding
post asap

ayo u never said how long my lines have to be

You talk too much shyt for a nimwit whos bout to get her lips ripped// .1
You tastin’~my~flames, im wastin’~time~again on these faggets who try an chase my rise to fame, one by one marvolous is leavin’ these guys dazed an slain // .2
Ill rip you try an stop me, cuz in this shit-this pricks finished…its my position to inflict this damage with precision, I manage to show im exactly what this kid isn’t //.3
By tha time you’ve read syck’s verse, you’ll have reached~fatigue...my beats~decieve, you see feats~achieved, this kid couldn’t “deliver” if he worked in a “pizza” eat, so just leave…//.4
I disperse anger twistin syck hurt this fag, an hit him till my fist comes back burst an split in reverse, wrist cut displayin my nerves, im slayin this herb //.5
Rip ya fuckin “vocal chords” out an tie em round ya neck so you can “hang on to every one of ya words”//(hahha).6
Lyrically ya under par, step to me lightnin’ strikes an tha thunder starts, in this battle ive just come~to~laugh
This retards hardly a threat, hes steady shakin, while I fight calmly in tha face of death //.7
Im squeezing on syck’s neck, hes screamin for a final breath, only now realisin he chose the wrong man to test // .8
Hes getting me vexed, im makin a mess of his flesh, an slingin tha rest in a hurse //
The next thing u gonna say is he” yo nurse”//.9
Nigga im down wit this game, I already stold ya fame, u fukin lame// .10


naaa'meaan

Holla Son Uppin 4 Ya 10 Lines Playa
Hit Me Up When Ya Done ......

a key for this ameteur..

the kids bitch sucking dick, he's the type to spit & gargle
and truth is i'd tear up old comics.. if i wanna rip a Marvel
i spit hard as marble, you can barely keep a steady flow
savings big files.. only time he ever handled a 'heavy load'
is he ready? no.. kids just a rookie he got no punch power
now watch playa get clocked out.. like it was lunch hour
ya just cant spit tight.. no one wants to see this kid fight
they'd rather see Syck, put an end to ya day like midnight
its just pointless, as you spit ya bars they get ripped apart
and shit i'd say ya finished.. but Syck won since the start

wam bam thank you mam

what the fuck is that long ass shit asshole.. god what an asshole
learn to format your bars u fuckin newb.. cheatin ass hoe
whatever..

Nigga Those Shyts Are Suppose To Be Like That Thatz The Way I Rite Bitch ...wut U Scared ...know Nigga....hhahah
Uppin 4 Votes Now

any REAL emcee knows how long a bar is.. NIGGA
whats there to be scared of? your filler verse? lmao

shut up nigga a bar is 2 lines as if u aint no igiht nigga
shyt
and lets go uppin 4 votes
and if u look at the real battle it was suppose to be 10 bars fagget
but i aint complain cuz ima win anywayz

look it sayz 10 bars but w/e lets go
uppin for votes son holla at me lata.. i aint got time 4 lil pussy'z....
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114117

holy shyt syck u alittle bitch all u do is wine and wine..
but herr i go i liked the way u spat syck
the line i liked was the kids bitch sucking dick, he's the type to spit & gargle
and truth is i'd tear up old comics.. if i wanna rip a Marvel

but yo marvolous ya whole rhymes was tight son good shyt
so in break down
marvolous took this battle all the way .... ight but syck good spittin u just need to battle me

I cant officially vote becuase I dont have enough votes but, here's what I thought..........

Syck took this one easily......His punches were by far more creative and packed a nice punch. Also had nice flow/structure and a good personal with the 'Marvel' line....Marvolous' just didn't get creative enough. He came with weak punches that most of the time weren't very direct. Obviously he didn't have any real personals and to top it off his flow fell off because of the poor structure.

My vote > ..Syck..... better punches/ personals, creativity, and flow..


Honest Votes > Bruise Banter vs. TJwillingham

good job there buddy incase u didnt notice your IP adress is at the right and you just voted for yourself hahahahahHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH what a joke

?????...????
that aint me nigga
shyt i made my cuzin a sn so u could use 1
cuz he didnt know how to make 1 fagget

if u dont know keep ya mouth shut fag...
hah u though u had me lol....dont think soo.. cuz i alwayz got a reason...bitch so itz still 1-0 cuz bruise aint got enough post