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Quelude vs Oakley
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30 min Blind Spit No B/S |
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Queludes word's are so wak they demand "instant replay"... sellin "the good shit?" I'd rather buy used condoms off Ebay How are you Dropping? As Aragorn or Quelude?... Your margin off error's the trunk size of a daewoo.. Watch,..Ima shake this herb, and make his daughter develop Kid can't do nothing right...get's punched and he fell'up You couldn't win if you set up and challenged yourself... Vote n Link? Que's playing more ball's than pool table felt.. This kid's injured in battle, sum one dislodge his throat.. Poor herb, Coming so broke...He's gotta beg Token to Vote:( |
Beg token to vote?!.....I ain't never asked no one to vote on my battles...let token come in here and say that shit. He knows I never asked him..why you saying that shit?
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its not a personal it's wordplay and your time's up any ways
token = money , poor and broke = sad and hurt....moron |
This kid from maryland.. looks like one of Robin Hood's Merry Men
Just my two cents...you can use it to the pay the Ferry Man On River Styx...After a dose of my spit Quelude...the purest shit..Oakley's just Pure Shit! lol Ha!..I'm laughing at you.. someone must've darkened ya tints The only way you shine's the outer glow applied in ya sig.. (around Oakley) Where's ya crew?..ain't got one?...who wanna squad with a bitch? What's your roster?..your name repeats like a comp with a glitch... Your career is stagnant...This I believe without question.. You going nowhere.... like red meat does in your intestines I'd show Oak respect.... but I'm really a fan of Ray-Bans To break it down in Lay-mans..The victory goes to Que man! |
wordplay-oakley
punches-oakley flow-oakley ohhhs-oakley personals-Quelude pretty much a blow out..... i was actually impressed by oakley i haven't seen him around here an he has nice puncehs with a direct flow....Quelude u kinda stretch your bars nice idea but try an not use two set ups in a bar make shore u throw punches... an direct disses... vote oakley |
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114
i voted an took time for your battle....make shore both of u return the honest favor an vote on mine...^^^there is the link |
Punches: Que, some nice ones from both, Que had a few more
Wordplay: Oakley, the broke line, I wouldn't've gotten that if you didn't explain it, too confusing. I didn't know Token is slang for money. Multis: Que, every now and then had 3-4 syllables, Oakley had around 2 every time Personals: Que, had the sig glowing line, and the ray-mans line. Oakley, the instant replay joke must've been used a million times. Opener: Tie, both were pretty nice, Oakley's flow in on point, both opened pretty nice. Closer: Oak, que's finish was pretty weak, good use of multis, but nothing besides that. Oak finished with a wordplay. Vote - Quelude Decent battle, Oakley you got the idea. You are better than a lot of these whack rappers in the front lines, so you'll step up to elevated lines real quickly. Throw in a few more punches, you got a relly good flow, so keep that. Quelude, your flow was a little off, but good punches and personals. Both of you keep it up. Where's ya crew?..ain't got one?...who wanna squad with a bitch? What's your roster?..your name repeats like a comp with a glitch Best bar from Que, dope multi with it sellin "the good shit?" I'd rather buy used condoms off Ebay Nice personal, funny Return the favor in my battle with Rule |
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nice battle by both cats.. actually worth my time to read.. breakdown:
Oak: punches were nice, flow was good, structure was nice, personals were off the hook, your opener was off the hook, your closer was very very very nice, overall = very very nice verse.. Best Lines: Queludes word's are so wak they demand "instant replay"... sellin "the good shit?" I'd rather buy used condoms off Ebay ^ lol.. very nice You couldn't win if you set up and challenged yourself... Vote n Link? Que's playing more ball's than pool table felt.. ^ nice.. made me chuckle This kid's injured in battle, sum one dislodge his throat.. Poor herb, Coming so broke...He's gotta beg Token to Vote ^ very nice.. had me rolling and going 'Oooooooh!!' Que: punches were good, flow was very nice, structure was nice, personals were ok, your opener was ok (could of been better), your closer was not very good, overall = ok verse.. Best Lines: Ha!..I'm laughing at you.. someone must've darkened ya tints The only way you shine's the outer glow applied in ya sig.. ^ lol.. nice Where's ya crew?..ain't got one?...who wanna squad with a bitch? What's your roster?..your name repeats like a comp with a glitch... ^ made me smile on this one.. nice.. well, nice job by both cats.. but however i think oak won this cause he came harder.. worth my time to read.. great job you two.. Vote - Oakley return the favor: links are in my sig: 'Lethal vs PROOF and Lethal vs Killer Emcee' |
Lethal...we're instant nigga...you can't vote on my battles.
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Both Showed signs of potential and skill, Oakley yes did come harder then i expected...
Both verses were pretty good, Good use of wordplay in both, Punches were Pretty tight, I think Que got punches even tho some of his were a lil played,,I wasnt feelin that merry man ish...Personals- Descent effort by both of these Cats..But that token voting line killed ish..Nice..Nice flow and structure by both...Que kept his ish a lil more on track w/ his structure that was really the only thing i saw that gave him upper hand sept for His constant use of punches....Mad close battle < Hard to judge But im gonna have to go w/ que jus cuz His shit was more creative, Phrased better...No hate tho Ok Spit some ill Shit V/ Quelude http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107056 BE a good, descent person and drop and honest vote on this battle |
yea.. i just realized that.. sorry guys.. good thing i didnt poll, just stating my opinion.. sry guys.. dont dq him or anything, its my bad..
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