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.Syck. 02-14-04 02:26 AM

MaRvOlOuS-pLaYa vs ..Syck..
 
iight since the last thread was flooded with freeposts and beef im reposting this.. plus your fagass voted for yourself.. which is just sad.. and doubled the line limit.. so i added 2 bars, only fair.. maybe we can get some votes.. from some one who's NOT YOU


MaRvLoUs~pLaYa's:


You talk too much shyt for a nimwit whos bout to get her lips ripped// .1
You tastin’~my~flames, im wastin’~time~again on these faggets who try an chase my rise to fame, one by one marvolous is leavin’ these guys dazed an slain // .2
Ill rip you try an stop me, cuz in this shit-this pricks finished…its my position to inflict this damage with precision, I manage to show im exactly what this kid isn’t //.3
By tha time you’ve read syck’s verse, you’ll have reached~fatigue...my beats~decieve, you see feats~achieved, this kid couldn’t “deliver” if he worked in a “pizza” eat, so just leave…//.4
I disperse anger twistin syck hurt this fag, an hit him till my fist comes back burst an split in reverse, wrist cut displayin my nerves, im slayin this herb //.5
Rip ya fuckin “vocal chords” out an tie em round ya neck so you can “hang on to every one of ya words”//(hahha).6
Lyrically ya under par, step to me lightnin’ strikes an tha thunder starts, in this battle ive just come~to~laugh
This retards hardly a threat, hes steady shakin, while I fight calmly in tha face of death //.7
Im squeezing on syck’s neck, hes screamin for a final breath, only now realisin he chose the wrong man to test // .8
Hes getting me vexed, im makin a mess of his flesh, an slingin tha rest in a hurse //
The next thing u gonna say is he” yo nurse”//.9
Nigga im down wit this game, I already stold ya fame, u fukin lame// .10



My Verse (..Syck..):

a key for this ameteur..

the kids bitch sucking dick, he's the type to spit & gargle
and truth is i'd tear up old comics.. if i wanna rip a Marvel
i spit hard as marble, you can barely keep a steady flow
savings big files.. only time he ever handled a 'heavy load'
is he ready? no.. kids just a rookie he got no punch power
now watch playa get clocked out.. like it was lunch hour
ya just cant spit tight.. no one wants to see this kid fight
they'd rather see Syck, put an end to ya day like midnight
its just pointless, as you spit ya bars they get ripped apart
and shit i'd say ya finished.. but Syck won since the start
now ya skin is scarred.. battling me? not a cautious choice
& as for multis.. this kids forcin words like he lost his voice

wam bam thank you mam

KiLLa_CaLi 02-14-04 02:39 AM

aight..
Marv, you had Bad Flow in your Verse..Punches were Ok but not really STAND out..
your wordplay was kinda simple..and very choppy..kinda Boring to read aswell..
the VOCAL CORD shit I'm pretty sick of too..every one uses that shit..it juss reminds me of a wannabe Eminem..Over-all verse..it wasnt wack, but it wasnt very Amusing at all..

Syk, your flow was Good..the Ryme scheme was good...You could have used a little better Punches, But it was Nice in my opinion...
you killed this Kid easily..
I liked your Meta's..simple but Ok..like the Midnight Line..

Vote..Syk..


Please RETURN the FAVOR and droppa VOTE. My battles are getting mad SLEPT on.

Me Verses LyricaL
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113705
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Me Verses TiLL-eye-Die
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113567

.Syck. 02-14-04 12:14 PM

up................................................ ..........................................

.Syck. 02-14-04 12:39 PM

i'll give an honest vote on your battle if you vote and leave a link.. since everybody else wanna just up their own shit and not vote guess i'll join the club...

.Syck. 02-14-04 02:10 PM

martha focker............................................ ....

KiLLa_CaLi 02-14-04 05:08 PM

Go vote on my other battles Syck..Pleez..help me out and Up them and Shit..Witta Honest Vote in shit..I know how you feel with Sleepers..will you do dat fa Me G...
I think you dropped a vote on one of my battles but would you on the others too..thx..

KiLLa_CaLi 02-14-04 05:15 PM

hey..My bad for FreePosting Like a MuFucka But...
..Syck.., Come Join Our Crew Main..it Got some Ill Head's in it..you'd fit Perfect dawg..

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Just Holla at us in the CREW FORUM aight...



UpPiN fOr tHiS CaT.....#2....Im outta this Thread Now...LoL

MaRvOlOuS~pLaYa 02-14-04 08:56 PM

ayo didnt i say no crew votes nigga damn
fuk listen to the fukin rules

ThA Ce 02-14-04 09:08 PM

Ayo Marv didnt have too good of a flow, ryhmes were aight, lil boring, punches were aight, nuttin special


Syck was juss siick man good flow, multis were aight, punches were above average, ryhmes were pretty good

Syck wins it hands down

Marv keep at it

ThA Ce

vote=Syck

return the favor

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114182

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113988

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114112

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113893
Vote on these^^^^

No1's votin on em

ThA Ce

MaRvOlOuS~pLaYa 02-14-04 11:06 PM

return the favor so ur doin a dick ride vote
stupid retard that dont count

Reefer 02-14-04 11:25 PM

yo anyone in this room got the balls to battle me or not

MaRvOlOuS~pLaYa 02-14-04 11:44 PM

yea me son lets go


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