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ORION v.s. Split Visions
Rules No more than 30 bars, 24 hour deadline, and first to 10 votes wins...
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My Verse
[b]Comments:[b] My verse consits of 26 bars, Every 2 lines equal a bar, so match mine if you want, but no longer, you have until 3 o'clock toinght eastern standard time to post your verse, Thats 24 hours...good luck.
Yo, This pitiful vagrant is simple and basic/ Thats why I'm spitting and splitting his physical matrix/ I'll slaughter you no matter what your name is/ Leaving you "punched" more than "time clocks" on "shift changes"/ It's getting hectic B, with all your weak weaponry/ After I beat you, you will "question your faith" like "jesus on jepordy"/ I drop bombs on dot coms like Saddam's Kids/ If you bitch up now I just might let your mom live/ When I shatter through this thread will spew/ You can call me "Q" cause I'm always ahead of "U"/ This kids flow is like polluted beach's just "basic"/(bay sick) I'm leaving shut down like bad dates kid/ It's inevitable You cant stop me/ I'll leave you "seeing more stars" than the average "poparatzi"/ Now you scortched in defeat, and it's impossible to abort free/ I'll just call you "month" kid cause you more than "week"/ I ate you like lunches, so go back to watching your gay porn freak/ Go ahead and harrass me, and I'll leave you cracked like two ass cheeks/ This fags verse is "played out"....so why is he "postin indoors"?/ He couldn't be on "top of the game" If he was a "NBA scoreboard"/ You couldn't have a "compound" verse if you were an "atomic gas"/ I've been blastin this fags dreams to rap/ I'll attack his words down his throat now he's talkin out his ass/ Call me a disgruntaled vet, the way I slap around this pussy/ You couldn't be tight with a noose on your neck, to put terms loosely/ Effortlessly, My verse will bless thee with the pain of epilepsies/ like contemplating the effects of Russian Roulette, it's death to test me/ I'm a Collossal Apostale thats holocaustal with proverbs/ I have a bone to pick, fossils from your body is the most probable spot first/ I mastered Text at age 5 my skills had surpassed your best/ Producing faster lefts than Cassius's Jabs that perhaps connect/ and bless your jaw while you harrass the ref/ Im abrupt and vexed, Im leaving this narcoleptic tuck to rest/ I'll "fracture his leg" so he'll have a reasoning to use a "crutch for respect"/ For you to win, That's like fat kids doing bike hops/ and the moment your mic drops/ you'll be in "over your ankles" like rocking "High Tops"/ I think we all agree this student battle's poorly/ He couldn't "rock science" throwing "stones at a labotory"/ My critique "cum's off the head" like an "orgasm"/ I'm leaving you "down and out" like a "epleptic having floor spams"/ Do you see the light? or does your wordplay blind your attention span?/ Me battling you is "pointless" like "Bill Gates attempting a pension scam"/ Your style is dead and the only audience you draw is maggots/ I'll make this wack kid shake frantic like nervous cocaine addicts/ Place him backwards, and give him a compass to trace his tracks with/ Your wack ranting would be best fit gallavanting around special schools/ Coming second to handicaps in battleraps, taking hits from vegetables/ You called my name out so I'll deplete you with ease/ Treat you like a egg for an omlet and beat you with cheese/ You could light candles with ya knuckles and still couldnt match my punches/ I devoured what you brought to the table, try skill instead of packaged lunches/ |
Reminder notice, 14 hours are up, You have 10 more until deadline, post something atleast, if nothing is posted, you forfiet.....Upping thread to catch your attention.
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We can battle to see if you’re the sickest/ With psychic gifts, I envision you delivered to a Mortician// I inject poisonous venom through a million incisions/ Biting into Split Vision like a reptilian lizard// I’ll Break your back and bend it, back into position/ Jabs aimed straight at your cranium, crack it and leave indents// Engrave my emblem, in the middle of your chest with a pencil/ I’m Mentally visceral, champion of these little games you play and get into// Every day I pray in the center of a satanic symbol/ Surrounded by candles, incense, and six pentagram symbols// I’ll injure you physically and mentally rid you/ Of your individual spirit and eventually kill you// NARCOLEPTIC ninja with a habit of Demonic rituals/ Official, killer with sharp instruments to slit your tissues/ Wit the skill of ninjitsu, I hit you with spinning kicks like a ginsu/ Quickly, before you die make some sort of submissive signal// Your chances are dismal, prepare to get posterized/ You’ll be forever lost in the blackness you see when you close your eyes// When my “body is dead” that’s the only way you’ll be “over Mine”/ (over my dead body) Dorks like you demoralize the art of rap with your really horrible rhymes// I’m Irate, I race into your residence/ The Nemesis that erases your existence with no retraceable evidence// Aimless, but most arrogant/ I carry various dangerous weapons, and spray lame emcee repellent// Your style is ancient as carbon dated relics, With your pre-historic lines written in the oldest form of Celtic// Step into my domain and get your flesh melted/ By Hellfire that burns at a million degrees Kelvin// I’ll Weld a metal sick, with it, I crack your helmet/ Then film myself Stab you in the pelvis with a black felt-tip// Write my rhymes on the cartilage of your skeleton/ And refill my ink cartridge with yellow bone marrow gelatin// I tell elegant raps, hella voracious attacks/ I lynch Split Visions like white racists did blacks// I’ll have you Hanging from a rope attached to branch/ Set Aflame, Disdainfully dangling forward and back// I’m a cannibalistic, carnivorous, ravenous rap catalyst/ Laughin ‘cause aint that the same rhyme you lost your last battle with???// When you see the sword unlashed, then you’ll know I mean business/ Now look him split in two pieces, now he is really “Split Visions”// All those silly punchlines and similes get you killed the quickest/ How do you think you have skill if you bit your lyrics from bitches?// Your one of 20,000 emcees here all writing the SAME STYLE/ I came from DIFFERENT battle board but I’m still battling the SAME GUY// You’re the first of my victims all standing in a straight line/ As I count my victories, they take turns laying in the grave to die// I was raised in a basement, chains hang from my skin like Hellraiser/ Even now, I’m playing with the sacred box that makes Pinhead wake up// Morbid since I was born, so I know painful ways of torture/ With the dark forces I contain, I enter portals to maim your torso// Your blood pours slowly, when I storm like Kamikazes/ Even though you made me smile with line about Muhammad A-li// I see, you have trained well bitch, all that practicing of Karate/ But when you felt my fist, you folded in half like Japanese Origami// You “acting” all “hard” like a solid statue of IRV GOTTI / But before you start a war with me, learn how to spell “PAPARAZZI!!”// :shoot: SPLIT VISION - “”I'm leaving shut down like bad dates kid/ It's inevitable You cant stop me/ I'll leave you "seeing more stars" than the average "poparatzi"/”” |
Nice verse, Nice ending, even though That paparazzi was a typo...lol, but good personal.,..
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upping for votes....i think this is gonna get slept on though
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upping for votes
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a n y o n e g o o d a t t h i s r a p p i n g c r a p
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Enough Spamming this thread, NO FREE POSTING...UPPIN
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Me and ORION both need honest votes on this battle, and we would appreciate it if we wasnt as slept on as other battles, Take time to vote on our battle and when we reach 100 posts we will vote on your battle at that time......
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Eh...before you start posting in forums, be familiar with whatsup. NOONE wants to read those two verses, because they might be rewrites of the bible for all they know. I skimmed through them, and decided Split Vision's was more skilled. You both need elevation. It seems like you can both flow and rhyme well, but there is nothing else at all. No wit, creativity, wordplay, etc. Maybe a few personals here and there, but it doesnt really do much. Elevate kids. Write shorter verses and concentrate on the dopeness of the content.
Vote- SV Hit this up right now... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114170 |
This guy...he "skimmed through them" huh...aiight..up
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This is a shame....he didnt even poll his vote......
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^ You are so true man, This battling system here SUCKS big time...I thought Highly of RB, but this shit is ridiculous, we get critizim out of 1 vote, and it doesnt even count cause it's not even polled, POLL YOUR VOTES.....Just fuck it, THIS BATTLE WILL NEVER BE SETTLED, BECAUSE NO ONE IS EVER GOING TO VOTE.....C'mon ORION we can go to better sites than this, hit me up on a PM, I KNOW OF 3 other TIGHT ONES...
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well..with know true votes....and with Split Visions seemingly banned.....what does this mean?? is there a Moderator in the house???
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