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Who Sayz I'm Not Able(hot as hell)
Flow wit Carbon Monoxide straight on to the Dark Side
I'm the force that runs the course of a dark mind Jedi's say the tricks a play are of a gods kind A top crime, some say I can even stop time From the heights of heaven to the depths of hell I kept hyrogliphics, secrets of tibetan black spells Tell the crop circle thesis better then Vinnie Paz himself I can tell real from fake, i'm tellin 50 gassed himself Flow is toxic, able to break the ozone layer Angels and gods burned by my sin so don’t go prayer Burn the holey scripts, those so called ‘readings of ours’ I ain’t carve in the faces, I destroyed the beings on mars Breathe all your breathes and make all of your deaths Replace Jesus and Allah wit Jae before all of you rest Spit life in to tombs and spit death in ta churches I’ve re-written the bible, my text in that version I've out smarted the phrophecies of a mothman Rite no your witnessin the hypothesies of a dark man But c'mon I can really be a showman I've showed that when i've showed men I destroyed the Ancient Romans |
please don't sleep
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This was alright here.....the structure was good i thought...maybe could be fixed up a bit in a few places though but it was ok.....the flow seemed to be alright.....had some good vocab in there....You had some nice multies as well, liked that....overall a alright piece, liked the read.
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