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Rappin' master vs Potent....... yo check this out
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10 lines max no recycling no hate votes u drop your verse first good luck |
Your the wrong combination to get passed this so stop.
And fuck probably knows the right combination when I master lock, I'm SOOOO the man right cuz I'm known to stamp guys, Put my hands on your neck and titan so much you'd think I own the franchise, Awww man you had me goin pretendin you was tough and all thug, So now I'm crushing balls off the tee's like the end of a golf club, This guys biting names, but it sort of reflects him because he hasn't one, His writing lames, again this reflects him cos he can't give an orgasms cum, This kid ain't a rapper no more, only sellin out on a gambling tout, Liquifyin his organs, so Potent could let it go and pour his heart out |
Theres a line between a newbie and vet ….a newbie is where u fit
…I’ll drop a weak spit…u got mike in ya avy and u still cant be it This cat choked in are last battle…he got ko’ed.. something serious I droped this cat quicker then making of the band droped mysterious …I’m like trillville cause this hoe nigga can neva eva get on my level I’m burryin this dude quick and lettin be the punches be tha shovel ….I come before this nigga Masta Rappa…the poll states that fact ….U rhymes are small and compact..they suck ass like a anal sex act It didn’t take much to have dis cat beat…this is anotha Ko fo sho …Leave this nigga in the hospital wit more connections then Ao (america online) |
Uppin 4 votes....all votes will be returned..........
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come on people vtoe on this battle................
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I seriously think Potent took this one. he had way better punches. Although RM I did like your openin.Thats my 2 cents.
Vote: Potent |
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this was a shit hot battle...both of u was killing it...
Potent......good punches,some hit hard others didnt...flow was there but could do with improvment....structure was cool too...personals were elemtry...but good alround...overall:7/10 Master...some hard punches but some a bit played bro.....structure was deffently there....and flow was ok...need to work on flow.....peronals were also elmentry....overall a good verse...7.5/10 v/rappin' mater (jst) Very good battle, both of u...keeep it up!!!!!! aaaiiiggghhhtttt!!! |
aight i'd say potent takes this one cuz he had better punches, structure,flow everything, the other cat kept makin up rhymes dat made no sense, so dats why i think potent won this battle
vote=poten can u hit this up? http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113661 |
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Aight... MastaRappa... ya punches didnt go wit the rest of the line... you talk about one thing but ya punch has nuthin to do wit it... like the Franchise line and the orgasm cum... wtf?? Other than that, some shit was played like the masterlock line... your last line was the best one...
overall, not the best verse... 60/100 Potent... Good punch about making the band!! very original... first bar was ok... 3rd bar was aight, metah was played tho... 4 line was kinda ehhh... ok... decent punch tho... I didnt like the last bar becauz of the wack American Online part... The part is played and then using "AO" instead of American Online was dumb... but you didnt need much a whole lot to win this battle... your Making the band punchline was the best in the battle by far... vote - POTENT |
Aight... MastaRappa... ya punches didnt go wit the rest of the line... you talk about one thing but ya punch has nuthin to do wit it... like the Franchise line and the orgasm cum... wtf?? Other than that, some shit was played like the masterlock line... your last line was the best one...
overall, not the best verse... 60/100 Potent... Good punch about making the band!! very original... first bar was ok... 3rd bar was aight, metah was played tho... 4 line was kinda ehhh... ok... decent punch tho... I didnt like the last bar becauz of the wack American Online part... The part is played and then using "AO" instead of American Online was dumb... but you didnt need much a whole lot to win this battle... your Making the band punchline was the best in the battle by far... vote - POTENT return the favor plz... Intox vs Luminary text needs votes badly!! So does Intox vs john... Thanks |
Uppin 4 votes....all votes will be returned..........
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potent: your opener was barely damaging,plus your structure was off, you need to pick a sylable count and stick with it...your punches were ayite, half were played and the other half were minimal at best, you need to be more creative with your punchlines..you had one metaphor I think..but If I cant remember if you had one or not, it probably wasnt very memorable....there wasnt any wordplay...your closer started out really simple, dont use KO and fo sho ever again..that is just amature.. overall you did ayite, you need to build up your vocabulary..and just keep battling..
rappin' master: your opener flowed well, but made no sense to me..your structure was decent..I don't think there was a line that went too long....your punches were accually pretty good ,I especially likes the golf club punch...you also had a metaphor or two..good job on that...multiples were good also...your closer was structured really good, plus the heart punch was cleverly put...overall you came a lot harder with your punches..there weren't any personals from either one so that wasn't a factor here.. vote:rappin' master .................................................. ............................................... now come vote on these .................................................. .................................................. ......... now it's your turn http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114089 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112366 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113218 __________________ |
aiight 2-1, we wont votez on this people. I will return da favour if you leave a link...
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