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Cannabarz² <vs> taciturn
blind spit
due 30 mintues afta check in ill check in when u do 3-0 is a KO no crew, dr, hate votes NO FREEPOSTING HERE! |
check in...............................verse startz, when u check in. 1ne.
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aight then, checkin in
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this niggas gonna find out soon that im the man in charge
maybe he thought it was hard to rhyme a word like cannabarz otherwise a name like cannabarz just seems kind of pointless check his battle with envee, no one shows up to his appointments cannabarz is 17 but look at the picture, its like he wasnt able, to find someone his own age so he resorted to the cradle its just seems strange that you would actually show that shit off nobody wants to know how ur sick ass tries to get off this mothafucka almost 18, and still into cartoons i hope theres a rematch to this battle, ill look forward to part two the only way i loose this battle, is if i cant find it in frontlines no more cartoons for you, now were done with fun time in an ordinary battle, verse an ok opponent, you need a great suffix but i dont need one in this battle, not verse this fag that sux dicks |
umm... 30 minute time limit, drop soon
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Cannabarz will-damage the opponent like malamars from parapalegics
Your a computer-nerd with the use-of-words found in american-secrets Their'-terrible, KEEP IT at that my passive-raps will burn-your-access Your ass-will-gasp, because you ain't seein-can like nervous-actors Your words-are-chapters, noone reads this hoe-exceeds like sickily-clowns And your trainin wasn't enough of aim, you couldn't target a victory-down! This kids-from-denver, I've been skilled mid-december your flows-fleshy So Taciturn will get dusted, not like sand but like Dinero and joe-peschi 1ne. |
uppin............................................. ...........
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wonderful, ur gonna get DQed for going under the line limit
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u didnt specify a line limit......................
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it doesnt matter though, fronlines alone has a minimum of ten
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oh.. well wahetever, none of my business anyway.. holla atcha boy chyeaaaa
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do u really think i giva fuk..goddamn..2 lines under..o mi god..call the goddamn copz..anyways, may i get some fukkin votes..
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uppin for votes
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uppin for votes
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Ok
Breakdown Taciturn… Ur flow was good..however nothing hard hitting…U need harder Hitting punches..something clever everything was basic.. Ur best line was “this niggas gonna find out soon that im the man in charge maybe he thought it was hard to rhyme a word like cannabarz” Only because I seen something in that line that was possible of Creating something clever… Now for Cannabarz2 Ok Ur flow was very good and U had very good vocab..I didn’t really See any punches that hit…or was their even any…However over all A well written battle verse.. Ur fav Line “Their'-terrible, KEEP IT at that my passive-raps will burn-your-access Your ass-will-gasp, because you ain't seein-can like nervous-actors” That was actually a cool clever punch line somewhat…Ur first line too Was good.. Overall Cannabarz takes it no hate…Taciturn stay elevating.. Please return the fav and vote here.. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...727#post1184727 |
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