baKn~Ruckus vs taciturn
 

10-14 lines
no crew, dr, hate votes
anything goes

do not freepost in this thread

ill check in when ur done with ur spit

yo i sit back, relaxin, perfectin my rhymes while the times passin/
call me crazy, but i see dis ina different light then most, its a passion/
rappin an makin people afraid ta battle me before dey hit their first bar/
cuz i kno ull prolly say sum shit bout bein a thug nigga turned rap star/
son ure either one or the other, and please i heard about it before, bout how u fucked my mother/
go ahead dude, the whole block got her, dont even use rubber, pop dat shit/
i kno itll u be yur first time so yull remember it, but baseclaims are so phony/
im so lethal scientists are tryin ta find a way ta clone me/
makin millions me of me, trust me i only be speakin the truth/
u might think u can beat me, but ill eat u up like an exotic fruit/
the juices flowin down my mouth wit every bite i take outta ya/
goin against me is like facin death in the eyes, ill pray for ya/
but u still wont get out alive, talk about takin me out wit a nine/
only gat u ever had , was the type dats spits water insteada fire/

heh dat one was ite..

ill post when i get back from baseball at around 7 eastern time

damn, you can tell im battlin a newb with these rhymes^^
puts a liitle dash when he is done with each line

his shit doesnt rhyme, sounds like a regular paragraph
my lyrics are like kamakazy, get ready for the air attack

this nigga talkin bout himself like his rhymes are heated
all it sounds like to me is hes a little to conceded

maybe im reading wrong, but was my name even mentioned
this nigga needs to take his ass to a WEC convention

i could spit under the minimum line limit and still win
cause my flow and rhymes are hotter than paris hilton

and do u say ur from that place cause you think i cant rhyme MiL-WuH-Kee
i can rhyme any fuckin thing, this bitch sayin if i disrespect him he will shoot me

i must admit, this bitch is the wackest herb ive seen on this site
i guess its safe to say hes not a nigga, his skins white

uppin for votes

uppin, drop a link

get this clown outta here with his spamming
i hate to be blunt with my reasons
but taciturn won this with better word usage,punches and juss all around flow
ruckus-u had all his qualities but a step below em keep elevatin ur game son
v/ taciturn

yo, yo, yo drop a link

uppin

taciturn murked dude eazy way better punchs less stretched lines and a decent verse not much though to me but had enough to beat rakus kid bot helevate and conitnue to drop if u even get online anymore

taciturn did take this.....he had some better punches plis the similies was lethal....
work in metas for both....structure was good but for the rest of the things includin balance needs work for both but tecturn does take this becuz of a quik good murkin
v/tecturn return the favor in me vs merderous in front lines

taciturn took this battle.....you had some ill punches and your similies was sick as fuck...........work in metas both of you............structure was good from both..............but work on your flow and you need to throw in personals...........pc

v/taciturn

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bakn work on ur structure ur lines r uneven and stretched work onm ur flow 2 usin the same word 2 make shit rhyme is just corney and ur vocab is far 2 basic work on that 2
and throw in some personals ill give u a 5/10


u had better vocab than him but could still use a lil work id like 2 c multis and personals worked on but besides those good verse i personally think u should b banned 4 ur racist closer