Bio*Chemist v.s Unwritten Hazard
 

10-15 lines max
No crew votes d/r
no hate votes..no biting feeding.
or recycling..

Sense U need more hours to drop iLL..it's Ur choice..U have an hour to drop..
or 2 hours if U need it..Ur choice...
and sense U brought it up U drop first...
remeber to choose how many hours 1 or 2..and it starts once u check in..

Get merked

fuck 16 lines , ill key one for u right now


battle me? my skills are endless, relentless...i got more "bars" than jailed up fences//
the mic menace, acting like Texas about to "serve" Chemist a death "sentence"///
my spits wetness will soak this MC until hes "washed up"//
bio chemist is a fraud, hes only a bluff///
like the chemical weapons in Iraq, that never popped up//
so you battle online, i dont give respect just cause you win belts///
and i dont need biological weapons to make this kids skin melt///
im devilish, here to" bomb" on these terrorists when i drop it///
then torture their "chemist" tied up in his office///
then make him read my lyrics contents so his eyes pop outta his sockets//
fucked up your optics, ill transmit a virus though kleenex///
infect his lines with diseases, then tell him to eat it///
this is my first time seeing a BIO CHEMIST, who doesnt know how to be "sick"////
i joined rap battles, and like a stray "kat", people showed me no love//
my inks blood, cause rap is the only thing that i think of//
and whenever someone says bio chemist, i always think DUD//
i got this thug running, to me its just funny///
im gonna shut him down like a chemist without any funding///
good thing you have a labratory, cause your gonna need nurse care////
imma fry this scientist with my mic, till he looks like Eintstein with worse hair

Ur Gay when It comes to lyrics, Anal to me and -Trapt-
This proves U try to do -Re Dic Us- (ridiculous) moves now how gay is that…
Battle me Fear is a Must On the same Level..??
I’ll kill U in the next episode so we can -See Equal- (Squeal)…
Unwritten so U don’t script any Hazard…
Read his sig “Gay n Green” (Gang Green) this Leprechaun proved he’s fagot
After this battle U won’t have a mouth To breathe Threw,
Chemically thrust moves vanishing Ur vocals..
With Ur whack ranks and gay style Ur new alias is -Diss Purse-
U proved Ur a newbie using 16 lines, Follow the rules How illiterate,
Even if I -Clowned Ur scripts- U still wouldn’t be an -Insane Joker Lyricist-


11 lines of true punches…
And U broke the rules..

i never agreed to ur rules....so how did i break them LOL

well first off nice drop

but being an MC doesnt mean spittng as many punches as u can......(oh yea that see-equal, sequal line is played out"




Read his sig ?Gay n Green? (Gang Green) this Leprechaun proved he?s fagot- SICK





good battle , but your verse didnt touch me or my pride next tmie come at me but still props


uppin 4 votes

I know my verse didn’t touch yours I ripped U…
U know why

Because Of punches and personals…That’s what wins battles
And by battling me that’s technically stating that U agree with the
Rules..
Ur good at ciphering I guess …as for battling there is a difference..
No more freespoting
Uppin for votes…

hey can ya'll vote on this?I need a few more posts before I can vote but I promise I'll suscribe to this thread and vote when I can!

unwritten hazard - ur structure was fuckin horrible.......that made ur flow fall off drastically.......vocab was pretty good........nice multis......wordplay was tight.......punches were ok........personals were aight......

bio chemist - structure was good.........flow was on target........vocab was ok..........some of the multis were good........wordplay was ok........punches connected........good personals.........

breakdown -
structure - bio
flow - bio
vocab - unwritten
multis - unwritten
wordplay - unwritten
punches - bio
personals - bio

conclusion - bio chemist takes this in structure, flow, and more importantly punches and personals so he gets my vote........

VOTE - BIO CHEMIST

yo since i took the time to leave my honest feedback id appreciate if u two did the same.....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114139

thanx.........

thanks for the vote and honesty

but seriously, bio chemist's punches were lame..lol

No they weren’t and stop freeposting….
U just admit it yourself my punches were good
Now you are contradicting Urself..which proves
Ur just a fraudulent lyricist…

Uppin Votes

Lets go quick votes..
I voted on enough battles this should not be slept on lets go..

Uppin
up for votes votes and more votes....stop sleeping...*

yo the link that i posted above already got closed, so if u could return the favor here itd be appreciated......

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114227

thanx.........

LOL i dont knwo what's goin on here... n noone better call me a noob or tell me i dont know what im talking about.... I think unwritten hazard took this battle...

Your right ... he didnt have a lot of direct hits ... he had a few nice lines tho .... The structure wasnt so fucked up i couldnt read it, coulda been fixed but his shit flowed fine...

"battle me? my skills are endless, relentless...i got more "bars" than jailed up fences//
the mic menace, acting like Texas about to "serve" Chemist a death "sentence"///"

^^ Nice multis n wordplay

"good thing you have a labratory, cause your gonna need nurse care////
imma fry this scientist with my mic, till he looks like Eintstein with worse hair"

^^ Kinda funny - real visual, good imagery


I really just didn't like Bio Chemists verse...

the first line was actually a pretty decent punch:

"Ur Gay when It comes to lyrics, Anal to me and -Trapt-
This proves U try to do -Re Dic Us- (ridiculous) moves now how gay is that… "

"Battle me Fear is a Must On the same Level..??
I’ll kill U in the next episode so we can -See Equal- (Squeal)…"

^^ Dont like this one

"Unwritten so U don’t script any Hazard…
Read his sig “Gay n Green” (Gang Green) this Leprechaun proved he’s fagot "

^^ creative wordplay ... punch was just ok ... hazard n faggot seem a lil too forced

"After this battle U won’t have a mouth To breathe Threw,
Chemically thrust moves vanishing Ur vocals..
With Ur whack ranks and gay style Ur new alias is -Diss Purse"

^^ Wtf is all this??

"U proved Ur a newbie using 16 lines, Follow the rules How illiterate,
Even if I -Clowned Ur scripts- U still wouldn’t be an -Insane Joker Lyricist-"

^^ Ok line but how is that a punch ...i get what youre saying but i just dont see how it's effective



All in all you had a couple decent punches, some decent wordplay... flow was ok...



This was Hazards worst filler crap...

"im devilish, here to" bomb" on these terrorists when i drop it///
then torture their "chemist" tied up in his office///
then make him read my lyrics contents so his eyes pop outta his sockets//
fucked up your optics, ill transmit a virus though kleenex///
infect his lines with diseases, then tell him to eat it///
this is my first time seeing a BIO CHEMIST, who doesnt know how to be "sick"////
i joined rap battles, and like a stray "kat", people showed me no love//
my inks blood, cause rap is the only thing that i think of//
and whenever someone says bio chemist, i always think DUD//"


But i really liked his first line and some of the other stuff decent until ^^ that crap...


It's almost a tie battle... i think Bio Chemist came weak... Hazard should work on less filler... but he managed to pull it off by a hair... I might be the only one who sees it this way but i think Unwritten Hazard got this....

PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOR AND DROP AND HONEST VOTE ON ONE OF MY BATTLES...

knew I should of put no newbie votes
Hazard if everyone reads went way over the
excepted mount of lines


whatever....
uppin

Uhh...this battle was subpar
Bio got it..but cuz tha other kid blew
he had punches and wordplay from 2 years ago
Bio..you forced so many punches/wordplay
But you got it..just a better verse

v/ Bio Chemist

hit this up...its being mad slept on...thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=113996&page=1