Lyrical MC Vs baKn~Ruckus
 

10 lines min
3-0 ko
no dick riding
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chek u droppin firs an shits gotta be done by tonight

you beefin wid lyrical,but he can beat u literal,u can only concer him brain visual,
dis aint political,like coures come your punches,
like homeless mans lunches,
but as Rillist crunches through is reclycled materail,
snap crackle and pop i kill MC's Cerical(cerial killing)
as my lyrics impail Rillist flow takes to de-rail,
my rhymes leave him blind,so i spit it in brail,
his attempted to dispatch lyrics was a 5 star fail,
but lyrical smokes him and Rillist is unable to inhail,
Rillist rhymes act like a car in reverse,
he's a lyrical drama queen who lacked lyrical rehurse,
iv'e dispatched a lyrical curse,
Rillist won'ts penskillz but he's only got a blunt pencil,
he's like lord of da rings,but delete bits suspensfull,
you beta adapt to lyrical being sucsessful,brake ur wid bear hands,
coz Rillist producing punches witch neva lands,
Rillist has had more bannes den verbal wins,
verbaly killing,murrdering MC's,like blood thursty twins,
coz my beats av u seeing double,lyrical host da victory and burst your verble buble!!!

drop it in a second, yur keyboard is doin damage ta peoples brains,
im losin more cells readin yur shit den watchin priests rapin in chains,
u need ta clean up yur mess, its a crime scene wit no substancial evidence,
who done it, theres a dead body but evidently the finger prints are missin,
your name written all over in ghost, cuz the man died from u talkin to him,
yur flow was so damn borin i didnt even read the thing thru,
u kept talkin to yur invisible friend, but he never replied bak dude,
smoked so much u gone stupid, the boy in bubble is clueless,
hes losin himself, listin to em cd an screamin i jus dont give a fuck,
but deep down hes just upset, so he flips quickly thru the dictionary,
to see how many words can describe his vampiric lifestyle,
u wanna be a rapper, bgut i dont goths belong on 8-mile.

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this was a pretty weak and close battle..

Lyrical MC... you kept a good flow all the way and your structure was aiight. Your punches were there but they didnt really hit hard enough. You had some personals but again they werent that hard hittin. You didnt have any wordplay ether.

Bank Rukus...you had a flow but it wasnt that good. Your structure was there but it didnt stand out to me. You had some nice punches and you had some v. weak personals. You also didnt have any wordplay.

Keep it up

vote Lyrikal MC (just)

I'm Voting for lyrical MC he did good i liked his punchs he rhymed everything fit together and he accually had disses so Lyrical u got mah vote!

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Lyrical MC- Vote

Bakn Ruckus- Dogg, You Came Weak, UR Vocab Was Prolly The Best Thing And It Still Wasnt Better Then LMC's. Your PUnches Hit Him, But NOt Hard Enough, Wordplay Was Aight, And Structure Was Strecthed, Fixed Ya Strcut. Flow Was Ok. Overall, Bad Verse..

Lyrical Mc- I Expected More, You Came Weak Too, Your Vocab Was Ok, And Some OF Your Punches Connected, Your Wordplay Was Weak, Work On That, Your Structure was Messed Up Too, but Better. You Flowed Good. Overall, Ok Verse..

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Needa Be The Same Length And Syllables

Lyrical MC
Punches- B
Flow- B+
Vocab- B
Wordplay- C
Overall Grade- B

Bakn Ruckus
Punches- C
Flow- C
Vocab- B-
Wordplay- B+
Overall Grade- C/B-

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Lyrical MC ~ I would have to agree wit testament, your structure needs to be fixed, not only for reading wise, but to have a fresher look..I enjoyed your verse, but some of your shit was wack (verbal bubble closer..ehh) .. BUT, it was enough.

Bakn ~ Your drop was kinda choppy bro, i had to re-read some of the lines to get it right..flow was aiight i guess, but the punches man, just wasnt feeling them..I think you coulda done better..

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Bakn, you didn't come very hard on this one, same as lyrical mc, this was a very battle, with both of you not maintaining flow, the punches weren't witty neither, Lyrical Mc you did take this though, you had a better flow, without your lines being so stretched, but what really took this battle was your punches were worded better and made more of diss to bakn, there wasn't nothing more to crit,

V/Lyrical MC