...Ending...(Freeman Diss)
 

You just won't shut tha fuck up will you?...I thought this was over...you're stupid bitchass had to open ya mouth again...just thought i'd do a lil keystyle for you cupcakes :)...um this is it...if you do anymore shit..uh..you won't like what happens..this should finish this off



Freeman..please man..get it through ya fucking head
Shut up damn..fuck it..I'll do it for you & fill it with lead
Watch brain cells spread..wait there are none..its empty
Freeman dug up Bruce's body..to say that he's dead lee
You ain't ready..making up excuses like "Wise is immature"
Just hiding tha fact that..
....I punked ya ass harder than Ashton Kutcher
Battling just sends you to tha butcher..& you're tha beef
He's lame..& I know this..
Sliced him open..& saw mad cow disease in tha meat
Getting declined crew after crew..even they know ya shit
& when someone tells you tha truth..you say..

What a homo..Freeman just straight jacked Origin's logo
Nice record there budy..I see you had sixteen no shows..
& my low blows don't hurt ya..you got nothing to protect
Losing in everything..dropping verses..he just loses respect
Not that you had any son..that was just a figure of speech
Heres another one..its Adam & Eve..not Adam & Steve
John Davis? well with ya korny ass disses ya look alike
Sureal got ya hopes up saying u was tight..untill he said syke!
Bragging about how you fucked ya boyfriend over AIM...fag
Ain't hard to tell you wack..
.....especially when it says on a tag!
Probably sucking on Physiks now..cuz he made you a sig
You must be a foster slut..considering ya everybudy's kid!
Covering up wack lyrics in itallics hoping no one would notice..
Bitch you never looked hard..so I'm glad you joined soft focus
Ya disses are bogus..even better..ya in a poetry crew
Ya tha laughing stock of RB..& you even know it too
Puppy dog..you a guppy..faggots swimming with sharks..
Oh shit..he put out chapter 3..
....too bad no one read it from tha start!

Drop it or get fucked up worse..your decision...But just remember this...you'll always be my bitch :)

damn. fire son.......good punches and personals....very consistant...
strucutre was good...flowed okay.....vocab was decent...
meta's were nice....
and wordplay was good too....
i've just got one thing to say

OWNED

lmao - A couple of standard punches but quite a few clever ones as well. Very personal - nice flow. Even more impressive seeing as it's like the fifth or so consecutive diss.

lol Wise that wus actually worht reading!
pretty hott keystyle... nice personals
nice punches nice flow nice everything...
wordplay good quote lmao...
and the Dead Lee line had me rollin!....
hott man.... spititn fire still....
peep my newest Om man...

....Tragic..Death....

nice diss wise it was decent
a few witty punches in there..
overall it was a pretty good read

nice disss, but why u dissin Soft Focus... we'll get u ;)

Actaully I wasn't even remotely dissing Soft Focus
I was stating tha facts..that is not dissing you guys...just him

Covering up wack lyrics in itallics hoping no one would notice..
Bitch you never looked hard..so I'm glad you joined soft focus
Ya disses are bogus..even better..ya in a poetry crew
Ya tha laughing stock of RB..& you even know it too

^no diss to your crew..and if i did..well tough shit
I can handle myself..pz

nice shit...lol

this was aight..

i woulda felt it more if it was an actual battle..
i also woulda been more harsh..but this was coo..
a few punches i didnt like...the adam and steve..
the bruce lee..the kuthcer...but it also had some
pretty good personals...the soft focus..the quote..
overall solid right chea...i hope to see freeman come back
cuz

"Aren't we witty tonight..."-Freeman....this had me rollin..

good shit wise ways..peace

Thank you :)