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I'm Da 1 Big D4, now recognize!!
I'm da new kid on da block, da numba playa of da game. I am da truth, the miracle, the savior of dis game. I ain't gonna say dat da new one. Without me , dere's neva gonna truth son. In this game, some people think that there ain't no hope. and some people be thinkin dat all one big joke. but after I'm threw with this rhyme. Ya'll gonna be thinkin that dis kid is on da grind. PEACE!!
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Dis is my first post, so please don't dis respect, cuz I'm new 2 dis game.PEACE!!
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Wackness Emergency Center...
Severe case for them to handle this time... You need to work on your structure my friend... Set it out like this... {I'll do it for you}... I'm da new kid on da block, da numba playa of da game. I am da truth, the miracle, the savior of dis game. I ain't gonna say dat da new one. Without me , dere's neva gonna truth son. In this game, some people think that there ain't no hope. And some people be thinkin dat all one big joke. But after I'm threw with this rhyme. Ya'll gonna be thinkin that dis kid is on da grind. PEACE!! Now you need to work on your vocabulary and complexity... There a few things for you to think about :)... Keep trying man... Pz... |
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