CRacKHeaD
 

even though its not the hardest, ive had it hard///
life is cold and dirty like a tragic whole planet war///
and i feel like the only surviver, left out on my own///
not only did i loose my job, but got kicked outta my home///
im outta control, society created ghettos like another death valley///
so many in my family, have to struggle and sleep in the allies//
sadly, the government and moral people arent even bothered///
i got roaches bigger than cats, and no running water///
were all being slaughtered, and im sufficating like a coffin covered with dirt
my TV is a mircowave, and my oven dont work//
and i dont work, sold all my belongings for profit//
my whole closet, i even sold pet mice who lived in my faucet///
ive lost, welfare gots me making more money then my job did//
i caught my self waiting outside the school just to rob kids///
i dont take caution, like a drunk driver speeding///
i dont care when, where or how, as long as im eating///
im stressed, i dont really need all this hassle////
my car is more broke down then the Loch Ness Castle//
its a handful, living day to day, dont know where to run to///
you feel like a quarter, when 3 bums try to jump you///
i come through hell and stop to smell the flowers//
but all i smell is me,......needing a shower///
my clothes have more holes than a golf course in a meteor shower
its a tragic war that involves half of the planet///
i cant stand it......if this is life, god you can have it//
if you ever see me looking at you, its cause i walked into on coming traffic


KEYSTYLE................feedback plz

dammit!!!!! I will read all of your entire rhymes because it's worth it. I hate reading too, but I love reading your stuff man..you got talent that I wish I had. now come to the cypher and get yo ass beat

nice mna. Easy to read while not being simple. Loved this piece it wasnt forced but everything fitted in nicley. props man...

thanks


and just so eveyone knows its not about me

just some fictional story



thanks 4 feed

Impresive, Couple of lines in there were played...But u did a good job staying on subject...The closer was ILL, I liked That....