Eye Care
 

Another topical..I love these topics though=)

Eye Care...

So much depends on it, Like what we want to see
Would we Be able to see colors, or advance in Studies?
If without Eye Care, something happens to our Sight
Would there be a sure fire recovery...
Or Just a blinded Operation, to regain back your sight?
Would we be much further than the blind man..
But deaf compared to him?
But If I think about it, without Eyesight, Would we Be blind to Sin?
Maybe so, But I figure, we don't have much to lose..
If we can't even see...What we have to choose..
Without eye care, would I care...
to find that perfect person through an Image..
Judging Books by their covers..If I can't see the Pages In them..
Beauty is Only Skin Deep, But what'd happen..
..if we lost that Beauty
Looking to nothing for reflection, or to make the soul soothing..
If without Eye care, would you have realized the importance..
Before I said this?
If I didn't have the Eye Care to see what I write..
Or You have no Eye Care to see this Message..
Or what if Eye Didn't care enough for you to even Get this?
If Eye Didn't care, then you wouldn't care to get the message..

coo...

i especially like the ending...that
was a fucking nice ending...a couple parts
in the beginning i didnt like afew lines..
the regain the sit epart i didnt like...
it also had some parts that werent so original..
the sin part..the book part....but overall i liked this
a bit...the ending gave it a better feel...peace..

peep the open mic in my sig...thanx

yea this was good, man.. i told u in aim, the thingy's.. so this is a Upppper.