Tortured Wordz...
 

I'm sittin' here bored as fuck just typin' a rhyme...
as I write from the mind with a light that's sublime...
I'm takin' back the game that is rightfully mine...
I'm writin' the linez that bring sight to the blind...
I speak Otherwordz...I've been enlightened through time...
I know that y'all might not understand the language I speak...
Otherwordz was placed on the planet just to vanquish the weak..
get shanked till you leak when I stab you with the pen in my hand...
my tounge is razor sharp and equipped to dismember a man...
I'll shatter ya nervez,leave cadaverz scattered when I splatter you herbz...
I'll leave you battered with a massacred verse...
a battle with wordz hardly ever endz as just a battle of wordz...
I gotta keep on rhymin'...ain't nuttin' better to do...
I never claimed to be the greatest ever but I know I'm better than you...
let it be true...don't make me have to prove it ya bitch...
my pen is magic cause I make fake mc'z vanish at the move of my wrist...
you foolishly spit a so-called freestyle after you rehearsed it...
so I sit back and watch ya death sentence turn into a verse quick...
so now I put an end to the verse...and turn my eyez to the porn...
ya dead so now I'ma start typin' ya birth...it's almost 5 in the morn...

this shit was hot it really didn't have a point but still it was on point, so just keep up the good work gun

wack....haha... nah, it was good, the flow was nice and smooth and the scheme carried well... some nice multis n shit.... another dope drop...

^^^I know...I'm just too damn sexy...lol

uppin'...

nice flow - multi's, vocab was adequate but I expected more seeing as you claimed it would be hard to understand you. Nice personal praise piece though - hit something in my sig - preferably Broken Metamorphosis if you haven't yet.

^^^aiiight...thanks for the feed...and as for the simplicity of the piece...as you can probably tell...it was a keystyle at almost 5am...so I just did it out of boredom...and I'ma hit ya piece up right now...holla...

uhhh...still uppin'...