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Daz Vs. Michael Madness
Ight...
Check In... 15-20 Lines... Due By 6 PM Today.. No Recycling.. NO FEEDING... Blind Spit.. No Crew,Hate,D/r Votes.... |
Check.....MM.....Check.....MM......Check.....MM
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i didnt know u posted this
ok here goes checkity check check check |
mayne push the due time up to damn late..i want to get this ish over with
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responded to callouts....offensive as i damage you.. intangible..only hear MM & good is in commercials 4 campbells... pure animal....i eat herbs alive....M&M's included Valentine's day is your favorite...you study the crack of cupid.. your wack and stupid...pretty chilish eh?... girls gone wild?...you went wild and gay... your style will pay....if i was a herb i'd say i'd murder u in text and shit.. but ill leave that to you...with your homosexual subliminal messages..* dyslexic shit...spell it out its how live you day by day.. and your purpose in life is fulfilled...your just W-A-C-K... lesson stays...you of no importance...like horny aids patients with rubbers.. and i'd use wack concepts...................but u already got that covered... and even if i stuttered...i'd never miss a chance to hit... edit it quick...lyrics are what your full of?...man your full of shit... move it bitch...ill be glad when this battle's over.. so i can take you d/r's and aim them at your asshole... :laugh:beat it:laugh: |
U told me I'd be deafeated, Now Its Time...Do or Die...
Want out?...... "There's Only One Option...Suicide"... You Will Cry...N Lose your mind,When I win This shit, Daz Sucks penis...why else would his av say rinse n spit?... persist to insist on dick If Asked out by a Man....He'd say yes, Lickedy Split.. I'll Show Simpathy to this kid.. cuz It ain't his fault he's wack, Studies nd Tests say Most Gay people were born like that.... I've torn your raps...To be honest you gettin plastered, I was wrong he ain't ILL......His rhymes are purely "Dazasta"....(disaster) The wins Been Captured,This cats surely been Mastered.... I'm full of laughter, So u winnin this? Nah, Never, U Can Erase Mispelled words,But not the loss Ima put on yer record... I've Beckerd With you.......nd' Enough is Enough, So yer 12-0 ......I'm here to put an end to your luck.... U fuck men in their Butts...... Plus your rap's Shit, Theres a fuckin Homo on this website........Nd' Daz It..(Dats It) -The End Ok If you don't get some of the punches ask me.... Ight lets get these votes up..... |
well this was a pretty easy one to decide.
I'm not even going to use my usuall voting process.:) MichaelMadness had alot better punches and personal's on Daz. Daz, I really didn't like you verse, that cupid line was like blah...the only reason you used it was because you thought of it yesterday...Valentine's Day... I like the rinse an spit line alot... along with the suicide personal, because he is in that crew. Good stuff. And Daz. your closing ryhme scheme was Over to asshole? And I wasn't feeling your attempt at wordplay with his initials. not good at all. Elevate :) [b]Vote = Michael Madness |
rite this battle was ok.i accpected alot more,
from daz here he came streched quite alot, this also affected your flow....punches were ok, but you threw no hard 1's with personals, m-m your punches stood alot more...i liked the way, you came abit witty here takeing the piss, you also had nice strucutre here i liked your verse man, nice you 2 but daz i did accpect more man......... plz hit this now http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114455 thx... |
nice verse by both
daz you had some pretty nice lines like this "lesson stays...you of no importance...like horny aids patients with rubbers.. and i'd use wack concepts...................but u already got that covered..." and your verse had some pretty ok wordplay however michael madness took this with better wordplay and a nice use of mulites.. he also had nice personals like that line bout rinse and spit.. all and all i think that michael madness destroyed daz with more punchlines and disses vote- michael madness hit this battle up with a vote heres the http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114455 |
I'll Show Simpathy to this kid.. cuz It ain't his fault he's wack,
Studies nd Tests say Most Gay people were born like that.... ^ basically won it.. Daz, records aint shit here.. bout time you realize it. battlin newbs, aint doin shit on a road to elevation.. MM just had more decent punches than you could put together. Tha last bar barely rhymed. n' you try to make ya closer as ill as possible.. an aight battle.. but one-sided v/ MM |
Uppin this SHiot, Ight lets get these votes up......
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Winner= MM
Michael Madness- Nice Verse, You Came Hard, Nice Punches, And your Personals weere Ok, Your Verse Had Nice Vocab, And Your Structure Was Nice Daz- Ok Verse, I Expected More, I Suggest YOu Get A Rematch Cuz i Know YOu Can Beat HIm, Your Vocab was Ehh, Structure Was Goood, Your PUnches Connect Somewhat :-/ Daz Punches- B- Flow- A- Wordplay- B- Vocab- B Structure- A Overall Grade- B+ Michael Madness Punches- A Flow- A- Vocab- B+ Structure- A Wordplay- B Overall Grade- A- Hit THis UP http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114379 |
Upping(2) Ight Only need 1 more, Someone Please Hit It up so this kid can recieve his first loss!!!!
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Upping this (3) Cmon Somebody Hit up this ish, only one more vote needed..
Leave a thread behind to be honestly judged |
Upping (4) Cmon Someone for the love of god please drop this last vote
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