MrTokes Vs Se7en
 

30 mins blind spit

10 lines min and max

No D/R votes
No hate votes
No crew votes
All votes explained

3-0 Ko or 1st to 5

Sorry bout other thread, im doze on other sites..
Ive also nearly wrote it lol...give me 5 mins..

Peace.....

iight I'm dropping now dawg, it's kinda weak, not my best but it's an ok battle verse

(Verse)

Hold the phone, I’ll cap ya dome, till ya seeing gold chrome
If being wack in a verse is talent, this kid has to be in a zone
Evolve looked at this kid, like how is his rap skills a gift
Only way he’s still standing, is because a body builder gave him a lift
He called for a fight, but he’s really getting beat wit the mic
His chance of winning, are like Loyd Banks turning white
This kids, career lived, is as short as a lighter that juss lit
I’ll blow out the flame, so your name is a cross between whale and bitch
Die young, he’s to dumb to be in a game for the smart and witty
This kid’s style is as pumped, as a fat teen wit big titties

Ill slaughter-this-kids-writes…to show he aint even when punished
This boy needs to alter-his-quick-types…its like hes tongue-twisted
Your only seeing-weak-bars…you cant handle me with lucked-chants
You don’t have any-lays to beat these deploys…nobody lands-a-glance
I have many-ways to snap se7ens poise…don’t think you stand-a-chance
The way this kids being-beat-hard…you could call him a fucked-cunt
I smash through-wack-spits…its like your setting-lot-packs-new-ways
Why does this newb-act-big…hes only getting-popped-back-to-place
These high-rate-spits-flip and pound…se7en wont hit-me-with-blurs
The way i-rape-this kid…i should be known as the next kiddie-fiddler

Uppin Se7ens drop!

Uppin............................................. !

Uppin x1, PLEASE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE IF YA VIEW THIS VOTE< VOTE

Uppin......One of my bars are fucked...its ment to be like:

Your only seeing-weak-bars…you cant handle me with lucked-chants
The way this kids being-beat-hard…you could call him a fucked-cunt
You don’t have any-lays to beat these deploys…nobody lands-a-glance
I have many-ways to snap se7ens poise…don’t think you stand-a-chance

Not this:

Your only seeing-weak-bars…you cant handle me with lucked-chants
You don’t have any-lays to beat these deploys…nobody lands-a-glance
I have many-ways to snap se7ens poise…don’t think you stand-a-chance
The way this kids being-beat-hard…you could call him a fucked-cunt

Not enough posts to poll, but here is what I thought...........

Seven took this.....Although his punches were not that great, I still felt they hit harder than Toke's....who really came weak in this department...Toke's verse was also lacking personals and didn't flow...rhyme scheme was fucked and some words didn't even rhyme... also he should get rid of the hyphens between the words... My Vote > Seven (better punches,flow, and had the only personal)

The hyphens are to show the multies LOL!!!! i had no flow..ok then mate..you accepting this se7en??

Uppin.............................................

And explain it properly.....

wat you mean uppin' x2 please vote people VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE

aight i think that seven wins this for better punches and the only personal

but this was a good abttle and toke had a lot of intereseting concepts
i liked his verse but felt that it was too ordinary and elementary

seven had the more entertaining verse and he also had a more complex verse

for better punches and harding hittin concepts and for a better organized and complex verse.......

v/se7en

uppin x3 PLEASE VOTE PEOPLE< VOTE VOTE VOTE PLEASE

uppin x4 PLEASE VOTE PEOPLE< VOTE VOTE VOTE PLEASE

iight...

Se7eN

Hold the phone, I’ll cap ya dome, till ya seeing gold chrome
If being wack in a verse is talent, this kid has to be in a zone
Multi's... Forced... Not bad though... 5/10
Evolve looked at this kid, like how is his rap skills a gift
Only way he’s still standing, is because a body builder gave him a lift
Lol... Nice... 6/10
He called for a fight, but he’s really getting beat wit the mic
His chance of winning, are like Loyd Banks turning white
[b]Nice again... 6/10
This kids, career lived, is as short as a lighter that juss lit
I’ll blow out the flame, so your name is a cross between whale and bitch
Nice... 7/10
Die young, he’s to dumb to be in a game for the smart and witty
This kid’s style is as pumped, as a fat teen wit big titties
Played... But nice enough flip... 6/10

Overall... 30/50

MrTokealot

Ill slaughter-this-kids-writes…to show he aint even when punished
This boy needs to alter-his-quick-types…its like hes tongue-twisted
This didnt rhyme... Nice mult's... 4/10
Your only seeing-weak-bars…you cant handle me with lucked-chants
You don’t have any-lays to beat these deploys…nobody lands-a-glance
I have many-ways to snap se7ens poise…don’t think you stand-a-chance
Not feeling it... 4/10
The way this kids being-beat-hard…you could call him a fucked-cunt
I smash through-wack-spits…its like your setting-lot-packs-new-ways
Why does this newb-act-big…hes only getting-popped-back-to-place
These high-rate-spits-flip and pound…se7en wont hit-me-with-blurs
The way i-rape-this kid…i should be known as the next kiddie-fiddler
The rhyme scheme was so hard to break down... That a didnt bother...

Overall... 15/50

v/Se7eN

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