Lust vs Halob
 

10 lines 30 mins to drop ya verse nigga

checkign in

before you step to me in this battle i hope u prayed
ill put ur ass on MTV so u get MADE
im comeign hard with a blade
so ill step back and wacth ur skills fade
i shit on weak MC's like it was my trade
u couldnt write a verse if i gave u a decade
u better lock ur doors cuz im goin on a raid
if u dont listen up u willl be gettin sprayed
so winnign this battle will be like beating a lil kid in OLD MAID
leave rapbattles.com and go back to the GAY parade

post ur shit

my rap
 

ill shred this dud in to peaces ill cut you up in to 7 diffren peaces.
i told u to quit will your still ahead guese what your mom gave me head in bed.
this bitch rap like he retarted by the way hes rappin sounded like his mouth pussy farted
your your thinking about going sucidil but know i guess
i am not your rappin idel

i just committed a crime dud got murkd in the middle of my ryme
this guy want to rap aginst me because i am a newb so you no what u can go fuck scooby
this battle is over i done murk this kid over yes i know its just someone telling you to bendover
it just like seving your time i told your friend to quit making your rymes this is my first time battling but you no this battle is over
this is the end of my ryme i hope this dud has time to make up his rym :huh: e

wow

Punches and Personals: Barely none, but Halo B took this kinda one sided even though he needs to change his rhyme scheme

Flow and Structure:Tie, both came easy in this category, juss simple and newbie

Multis and wordplay:None, both came to simple, need to elevate alot, both of you

Conclusion:Halo B took this barely, both verses were, weak, simple, and too newbie and Halo B u need to seriously elevate and so do you Lust, you both need to check into wackness emergency center and see wat punches and personals are, no offense

Vote-Halo B

uppin x1 VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE PLEASE

uppin

you guys were ok but you both need to work on you rymes a little

werd, uhh it was aite

my vote=halob

even though both of you gotta work on ur flow and like halob some of ur shit was just stupid like "i told u to quit will your still ahead guese what your mom gave me head in bed." that made no sense what so ever you lost ur flow + topic, work on that

enough sed..1

vote=halob

ayo halob one this battle easy son
lust u aint do nuttin to diss halob....and plus at least halob had flow
and multies
iight so my votes goes to halob cuz he merked lust

ayo c thru vote on my battle vs sytk9 iight playa peace out
cuz im uppin for votes in my battles

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Lust Just Stop I Laughed For Like 5 Minutes No Personals No Nothing. Hit Da Basics.
And Halob What Da Fuk Was Going On In Ya Head .
Dat Was Some Other Shit You Was Spazzing Yo,
Cant Be Rappin Like That On This . Still Got My Vote Though
Lust Give It Up My Vote 4 Halob
Da Butcha Has Spoken 1