The Ideal
 

no explination needed....this is just how it should be
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Like a passionate wine dancing through my veins
soft music drifting through my ears on this night of love
beneath the lamp light out in the rain's gentle touch
twirling within passion and warmed by her smile
it is a night of magical mystery
listening to the whispers of the trees
trapped within glances trying to catch the eye of Aeries
roses overflowing with color, an unspoken message
our subtle movements in the quiet night's air
on that night that our kisses sealed with love
Magic weaved through thought and cleaved in stone
me and him together sipping champagne beneath the twilight
faces illuminated by the moon, hopeless romantics united
he says all the right things and I’m trapped within his gaze
walk out into the soft night’s rain
a mist clings to my hair as we walk hand in hand
perfect evening with the man of my dreams
everything I’ve ever wanted, a companion of my own
cuddling softly together in his bed
she’s all I ever wanted in life
beautiful, smart, a goddess fallen from heaven
holding her close, never to let her get away from me
the smell of her perfume entrances my mind
kissing her softly, passionately upon her silken lips
drawn into her beauty, each kiss getting hotter
the sweet taste of her tounge
pressing closer into him
just taking in the feel of him against me
chocolate covered kisses sweeter then wine
my hands freely roaming his person
our souls melting into one as the heat increases
gently kissing her neck, nipping it softly
my hands allowed to freely wander
the softness of her skin, the warmth of her flesh
two bodies pressed together, warm sensual passion ignited
each passion filled kiss, each love filled bite
sending shivers down my spine, I tremble beneath him
like ecstasy flowing through my veins
sensations all unknown until now, as I make love with the one
not something hollow, and emotionless
not just ending some unseen craving
true love, passionate love with a man who is true to his being
the subtle curves her figure guide my hands
fingers dabbling in places before untouched
teasing her emotions, drawing out the animal within
his touch to my naked breasts causing ecstatic pleasure
his fingers roaming within me
his every movement pleasurable
as our breathing intensifies
satisfying his every sexual desire, passionately rubbing him right
the intensifying sex causing my breath to grow faster
her moans encouraging me, drawing me on
working closer and closer to the ultimate high
floating up towards the heavens as we shutter beneath each other
lost within our own silence and our own heat
him still within me, and our souls still merged together
as we both reach our peaks, the best of the best
now lost within our moans, our passion, our togetherness
laying there after a beautiful night
her asleep in my arms, held close to me
she looks even more beautiful as she lays there
resting within my arms as I realize what this is
I realize that she must be mine and that I would be nothing without her
Realizing that I would never experience a night of love like this again
Resting gently in his arms, as he makes me feel safe
As I just turn to look into his eyes
His gaze makes me tremble with love and with passion
And I realize, as I rest in his arms what this is
I realize that he must be mine and that I would be nothing without him
Realizing that I would never experience a night of love like this again…

You've got a bit of an inviting writing style methinks, i thought that was going to be too long to keep my attention. Pure insight and emotion, i dont know what it was you put into this... soul? hahaha too tired. Wouldn't change a thing. Well put together, i gdig it

lol thnx man

hey, that written by two people man? you to blue, her to pink or whatever, this is a school comp so im not sure about the colors. If it was just you than id be a lot more impressed i gotta admit...

yea it was just me...i colored it different so u could see which side was thought by the guy and which was thought by the girl...altho ive been told i didnt need that lol

Why is this being slept on.??
Ok this was a very I mean a very good piece..
This piece had a lot of imagery...
Like Penskills pieces they always have me picture
something this piece did as well..The thought and emotions
were like whoa...You are a good poet..I never peeped your
pieces keep it up family...Nice the way you typed Blue for you
and pink for the girl....Nice

My favorite lines was: "drawn into her beauty, each kiss getting hotter
the sweet taste of her tounge

"Like a passionate wine dancing through my veins
soft music drifting through my ears on this night of love
beneath the lamp light out in the rain's gentle touch
twirling within passion and warmed by her smile
it is a night of magical mystery
listening to the whispers of the trees
trapped within glances trying to catch the eye of Aeries"
very nice opener keep it up ..

Peace

thnx mucho dawg feed is much appreciated