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Makaveli-rest vs OutCome
10 bars max
No feeding No crew No stupid voters have it up with in two hours OR LESS |
alright
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you go first
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LoL fuck you, this my callout i said fuck that shit.. just for that you post first ill have mine up with in the hour...
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u say i go first and you called me out
you actin gay thats why im gonna punch u in the mouth im goin first like all the time ill spit the venam while i ryme ill rap so hard youl be in the shine your gonna be sour like a bunch of lime you aint even worth a penny or a dime just go up a montain and start to climb just jump off and get buried in slime the outcome is gonna be losing to a g like me just go and run and flee |
some one tell this cat tupacs dead - so makaveli can rest
get it through your head you not ill your only wack at best my fucking computer froze after the page first loaded so you would be merks like whoa, if i remembered what i wroted look i just beat your verse, just because your that wack fuck punchs, ill have multis leave your verse slapped wickidy crap your all of that, next time work hard on rap connect punchs to ya verse, like metal fist aimed at a magnet your wackness is that attractive to my punching habbit Wick wick wickidy wha wickidy wha wick wick wickidy wha wickidy wha boom era cha boom era cha boom era cha boom boom boom boom era cha |
Not enough posts to poll but, here's what I thought...............
Uhhh...pretty ugly.... OutCome defininitly takes this though....punches hit harder and by far showed more creativity...also had a personal, where as Rest' didn't really have one...Rest, your verse was wack....hit the WEC immediately...attempted punches...but fell well short...some serious elevating is needed...if possible...work on everything...My vote > Outcome (you could tell he didn't try hard, but he didn't need to...Better overall punches, personals, and creativity) |
Aw man, makaveli, no disrespect, but you need to find another passion dawg..
Anyways.. Outcome -- you had some creative shit man, punches hit pretty hard (especially when comparing to that verse by makaveli)..nice structure as usual, and not bad with the flow, choppy in some parts.. best line: Quote:
Makeveli -- like i said in your previous battles man, you need to either improve then come back, or find another hobby...or SOMETHING! ... best line: Quote:
Overall ~ hmmm...hard choice..ima go with Outcome :thumbup: |
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Mak - no creativity.. no originality.. no punches.. no flow.. no decent personals.. no vocab.. no points
Out - opened nicely.. 'wroted' line was forced beyond belief.. but other than that u were consistant.. clean flow.. nice personals.. original concepts.. an enjoyable read. VoTe = OutCome Drop a vote on this plz: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...d.php?p=1188764 ...1 |
i like the wroted line, it reminds me of Jay-Z changin words around and make them work
just me though vote- outcome ROFL LMAO LOLOLLOLL "ill rap so hard youl be in the shine" "just go up a montain and start to climb" |
Upping this like whoa.. N dont get down MR, just keep at it and work on your punchs more with a battle (dissing your opponent) as time goes by you will get better.
oNe |
Break Down:
Micaville-Rest: Elevate before battling..Go to cipher the cipher realm and practice Hard! Everyone needs the practice. You need punches and personals , witty ones As well.. Take your time when constructing your schemes.. All you had was ok structure and rhyme scheme. Simplistic all around however Outcome: You came average nothing spectacular at all. That sudden outburst of stupidity At the bottom of your flow made me want to vote against you. You came hard enough To beat me. Vote goes to Outcome: Better verse period |
“You came hard enough
To beat me“. < that’s definitely a typo... I mint to say you came hard enough to beat Him...wouldn't want to gas your head..lol |
Mak:
punches were not there (definately need to work on these), flow was ok, structure was ok but needs changed, personals werent there, opener was crap, closer was crap as well, overall = shitty verse.. Best Lines: none.. Out: punches were nice, flow was nice, structure was nice, personals were awesome especially the 1st line (nice), opener was awesome, closer was wack (clearly, lol, but u didnt need it), overall = awesome verse.. Best Lines: some one tell this cat tupacs dead - so makaveli can rest get it through your head you not ill your only wack at best ^ the 1st line of this bar made me go 'oooooooooh!' for almost 4 seconds, nice.. my fucking computer froze after the page first loaded so you would be merks like whoa, if i remembered what i wroted ^ nice, plain put, nice.. connect punchs to ya verse, like metal fist aimed at a magnet your wackness is that attractive to my punching habbit ^ lol.. this was nice.. nice attempt by mak, just elevate and u'll get better.. Vote - OutCome BE SURE TO HIT THE BATTLES IN MY SIG!! |
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