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Unwritten Hazard __vs__ illtalic
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due in an hour.. i'll post first.. no feedin.. same old same old.. check in soon as ya see this.. |
i spit, rip, then i vanish........... posting fake votes in the ballot///
im getting votes from illtalic....using eleborate tactics to become a HAZARD fanatic// what a faggot, tryin to front, imma leave you soaked like a pump in a swamp/// then make "iLLtalic" bleed, like ink from a "font"// your avatar says "really is that gully"// he probably ment to type "REALLY IM UGLY"// you got nothing, like the "projects" im buring your "garbage" fast/// really fag, i wouldnt let you "blow me" if your were an atomic blast/// this kids a "JOKE", he should change his name from illtalic to "COMIC" sans 9 lines should be sufficient l |
fuck an hour, KEY somthin
Today, 07:04 AM illtalic Today, 07:16 AM Unwritten Hazard |
The Chemist already dropped u .. now im makin sure ya really hurt
the past is the same as ya future.. dead an buried beneath the dirt… Style resembles ya heroes.. a long forgotten boy band I’ll call u Justin.. cos outta Sync ya clapped by ya own hand… So drop ya 2 cents.. ya can even drop nickels an dimes But like big nosed coke addicts I’ll simply hoover ya lines… Cos Illtalic’s the Harold Shipman of RB.. ‘Dr Death’ will do fine im performin talent transplants.. so now ya ass is really mine… The votes'll never be in ur favor kid.. no one understands ya vibe cos scratchin at the surface of talent DOES NOT make u a Scribe... Nicca I'll plant ya face on the side of the road.. so ya constantly see the curb Breedin slurs.. call this bitch a Root.. he has to elevate jus to be a Herb... |
lol nice
i like the ending we should have went like 20 lines so i coulda used "im more "BOLD" then illtalic" or "your not ILL-talic, your just ILL-iterate" or somthing like that, good battle, uppn 4 votes |
Unwritten ~
i spit, rip, then i vanish........... posting fake votes in the ballot/// im getting votes from illtalic....using eleborate tactics to become a HAZARD fanatic// not a bad use of multis, nice opener what a faggot, tryin to front, imma leave you soaked like a pump in a swamp/// then make "iLLtalic" bleed, like ink from a "font"// hmm..ok, ok..i feel ya here.. your avatar says "really is that gully"// he probably ment to type "REALLY IM UGLY"// kinda the corny humor..so so you got nothing, like the "projects" im buring your "garbage" fast/// really fag, i wouldnt let you "blow me" if your were an atomic blast/// this kids a "JOKE", he should change his name from illtalic to "COMIC" sans very creative closer, liked the last line, lol ~~ illtalic ~ The Chemist already dropped u .. now im makin sure ya really hurt the past is the same as ya future.. dead an buried beneath the dirt… ehh, wasnt feeling this.. Style resembles ya heroes.. a long forgotten boy band I’ll call u Justin.. cos outta Sync ya clapped by ya own hand… lol! So drop ya 2 cents.. ya can even drop nickels an dimes But like big nosed coke addicts I’ll simply hoover ya lines… wasnt feelin it...sorta...wack Cos Illtalic’s the Harold Shipman of RB.. ‘Dr Death’ will do fine im performin talent transplants.. so now ya ass is really mine… good general diss..not a personal though.. The votes'll never be in ur favor kid.. no one understands ya vibe cos scratchin at the surface of talent DOES NOT make u a Scribe... hmmmm....so so at best.. Nicca I'll plant ya face on the side of the road.. so ya constantly see the curb Breedin slurs.. call this bitch a Root.. he has to elevate jus to be a Herb... second line was good lol Damn, overall, this was actually close. But but but...reading it over again, I liked Unwritten's approach better. You were both equal with flow, structure, illtalic..you spit any multis? maybe in the closer, might be stretching it... Anyways, Ima have to give this to Unwritten, but overall, this was a really good battle, you 2 should consider a rematch... Vote ~ Unwritten |
Hit this up...sry, forgot to post it..
Gracias.. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114599 |
Damn at not puttin 'no herbish votes' in the rules.. oh well.
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Man, I'm just giving my honest opinon man, damn.
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^werd 2 illtalic that was gay..lmfao............
rite ill took this wateva man its clear , unwritten you had some really nice wordplay, but your verse was newbish man no hate but, wats all the * // for leave em out next time, also your punches were ok but they didnt hit as hgard ad ill's, ill had a much better strucutre and flow also, v-ill.......................... plz hit this up now http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...55&page=2&pp=15 thx alot no hate........ |
Someone on my wavelength!
Wahey! |
thanks/// 4 ////the ///vote//
lol i smell a rematch |
unwritten-u didnt really have any decent punches in ya verse......u had some nice flow and multies but u didnt have hard punches...that is the main part of a battle...also u need to stop putting "" around ya words that is newbish....overall below average verse....4/10
illtalic-decent verse.....u had consistancy and a few nice punches....i liked your closer it was real creative....u took this battle wit more creativity and consistancy...overall decent verse.......6/10 v/illtalic |
-uppn-
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in my opinion i think illtalic took this
punches: ill But like big nosed coke addicts I’ll simply hoover ya lines… Cos Illtalic’s the Harold Shipman of RB.. ‘Dr Death’ will do fine personals: ill The votes'll never be in ur favor kid.. no one understands ya vibe cos scratchin at the surface of talent DOES NOT make u a Scribe... flow: both had aight structure but ills was better structure: ill had better because his were about even overall i gotta go with illtalic peep mine http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111414 |
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